Aug. 15, 2021
The End of The War
In Japan, August 15th is the anniversary of the end of World War II, and it has been 76 years since the war ended. People who experienced it are old now; the youngsters prone to regard the war as a part of history or something difficult, being unrelated to us.
In the last years of the war, the military of the Empire of Japan developed and operated inhumane weapons such as Kamikaze. Kamikaze pilots are the almost same age or younger than me at that time. Not to repeat the tragedy, I think I have to learn various things broadly and to participate in democracy.
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"Learn various things broadly" isn't wrong but sounds very awkward.
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76 years. It feels like it was a lot longer ago. It's crazy to me to think that all that stuff happened in my dad's lifetime.
Aug. 16, 2021
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In Japan, August 15th is the anniversary of the end of World War II, and it has been 76 years since the war ended. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People who experienced it are old now; the youngsters prone to regard the war as a part of history or something difficult, being unrelated to us.
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In the last years of the war, the military of the Empire of Japan developed and operated inhumane weapons such as Kamikaze. |
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Kamikaze pilots are the almost same age or younger than me at that time. Kamikaze pilots |
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Not to repeat the tragedy, I think I have to learn various things broadly and to participate in democracy.
"Learn various things broadly" isn't wrong but sounds very awkward. |
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