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naho2863

Aug. 31, 2022

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The end of summer

Happy, because I love the next seasons, my favorite is Halloween.
On these days I feel nostalgic because November is near.
And on that month my family and I remember our loved pets.
We celebrate "día de muertos" similar to Halloween and put photos of our dog and cats on the altar.

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The eEnd of sSummer

HI’m happy/I feel happy, because I love the next seasonsfollowing seasons and the holidays they bring, my favorite isbeing Halloween.

Favourite -> Australian/British spelling

I’ve changed this one quite a bit, don’t hesitate to ask me for an explanation :)

On these days I feel (particularly) nostalgic because November is near.

And on that month my family and I remember our loved pets (whom have passed on).

We celebrate "día de muertos" which is a holiday/event similar to Halloween and we put photos of our dog and cats on thean altar.

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Well done, please do not hesitate to ask if you have any questions of course. Keep going!

The end of summer


The eEnd of sSummer

Happy, because I love the next seasons, my favorite is Halloween.


HI’m happy/I feel happy, because I love the next seasonsfollowing seasons and the holidays they bring, my favorite isbeing Halloween.

Favourite -> Australian/British spelling I’ve changed this one quite a bit, don’t hesitate to ask me for an explanation :)

On these days I feel nostalgic because November is near.


On these days I feel (particularly) nostalgic because November is near.

And on that month my family and I remember our loved pets.


And on that month my family and I remember our loved pets (whom have passed on).

We celebrate "día de muertos" similar to Halloween and put photos of our dog and cats on the altar.


We celebrate "día de muertos" which is a holiday/event similar to Halloween and we put photos of our dog and cats on thean altar.

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