Aug. 15, 2020
The earliest memory
I can't be totally sure what my earliest memory is, but I can think of one that might be it.
To be honest, I have been thinking about whether it is a memory of a dream or a true memory for many years, and I am still not certain and probably never will be. The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and just a little farther ahead of me was standing my cousin. I estimate I was 3 years old at most.
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Titles always have every word capitalized.
To be honest, I have been thinking about whether it is a memory of a dream or a true memory for many years, and. I am still not certain and probably never will be.
Aug. 16, 2020
Thanks for the correction. I didn't know every word in a title needs to be capitalized—it differs from the Czech language.
I suppose the ", and" isn't wrong. Maybe it just sounds better to you with a full stop?
The earliest memory
I can't be totally sure what my earliest memory is, but I can think of one that might be it.
The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and just a little farther ahead of me was standing my cousin standing there.
The earliest memory
I can't be totally sure what my earliest memory is, but I can think of one that might be it.
To be honest, I have been thinking about whether it is a memory of a dream or a true memory for many years, and I am still not certain and probably never will be.
The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and my cousin standing just a little farther ahead of me was standing my cousin.
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Excellent writing!
Aug. 16, 2020
Thank you for the feedback! It helps a lot.
I need to pay attention to the words order a little more. I think it has something to do with the fact that I am a Czech. We put at the end of the sentences what we want to emphasize.
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I estimate I was 3 years old at most. |
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The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and just a little farther ahead of me was standing my cousin. The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and my cousin standing just a little farther ahead of me The only thing I can remember is me standing next to our house, and just a little farther ahead of me was |
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Titles always have every word capitalized. |
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I can't be totally sure what my earliest memory is, but I can think of one that might be it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To be honest, I have been thinking about whether it is a memory of a dream or a true memory for many years, and I am still not certain and probably never will be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! To be honest, I have been thinking about whether it is a memory of a dream or a true memory for many years |
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