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The Dream Travel Destinations

For me, there were several places I wanted to go while I was growing up. When I was a teenager, I loved football and had a dream to visit Manchester to watch a football match of Manchester United team. That time I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.
Then, later, I had a DVD about nature of the USA. It was from "worldwide nature" series or something. I was amazed of the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places. (I didn't have Internet back there, otherwise I just had watched YouTube). I also watched TV show 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA. The show was very exciting too. I wanted to do a road trip across the country just like them.
Many years had passed, when I decided to learn French as I wanted to experience learning a new language from zero. Of course, I became interested in visiting France some day. I think it has its unique charm, and it's very pleasant place to be. I also was a fan of 'Tour De France', so going there to see the route's places would be a nice idea.
Lately, I took up doing yoga. Now I have an intention to visit India and learn more yoga, travel to ancient places and feel their atmosphere. I think India has kind cheerful people, nice food and beautiful nature.

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For me, there were several places I wanted to go to while I was growing up.

TAt that time, I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.

Then, later, I had a DVD about nature ofin the USA.

I was amazed ofby the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places.

(I didn't have Internet back there, otherwisen, so I just had to watched YouTube).

I also watched the TV show 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA.

I think it has its unique charm, and it's a very pleasant place to be.

I think India has kind cheerful people, nice food and a beautiful nature.

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The Dream Travel Destinations

When one uses "the" it's for a single object. Since you wrote "destinations", it's not applicable because there are multiple destinations.

For me, there were several places I wanted to go whilen I was growing up.

When I was a teenager, I loved football and had a dream to visit Manchester to watch a football match of Manchester United team.

It seems a bit redundant to write "team" at the end. Usually, one just writes the name of the team.

TAt that time I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.

Then, later, I had a DVD about nature ofin the USA.

It was from a "worldwide nature" series or something.

You'll need an article to connect "from" and "series".

I was amazed of the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places.

(I didn't have Internet back theren, otherwise I would have just had watched YouTube).

I also watched TV show called 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA.

The show was very exciting too.

I wanted to do a road trip across the country just like them.

Many years had passed, whenand I decided to learn French as I wanted to experience learning a new language from zero.

Of course, I became interested in visiting France some day.

I think it has its unique charm, and it's a very pleasant place to be.

I was also was a fan of 'Tour De France', so going there to see the route's places would be a nice idea.

Lately, I took up doing yoga.

Now I have an intention to visit India and learn more yoga, travel to ancient places and feel their atmosphere.

I think India has kind cheerful people, nice food and beautiful nature.

The Dream Travel Destinations

The Dream Travel Destinations

When one uses "the" it's for a single object. Since you wrote "destinations", it's not applicable because there are multiple destinations.

For me, there was several places I wanted to go while I was growing up.

When I was a teenager, I loved football and had a dream to visit Manchester to watch a football match of Manchester United team.

When I was a teenager, I loved football and had a dream to visit Manchester to watch a football match of Manchester United team.

It seems a bit redundant to write "team" at the end. Usually, one just writes the name of the team.

That time I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.

TAt that time I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.

TAt that time, I was really fond of the Great Britain in general.

Then, later, I had a DVD about nature of the USA.

Then, later, I had a DVD about nature ofin the USA.

Then, later, I had a DVD about nature ofin the USA.

It was from "worldwide nature" series or something.

It was from a "worldwide nature" series or something.

You'll need an article to connect "from" and "series".

I was amazed of the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places.

I was amazed of the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places.

I was amazed ofby the beauty and diversity of the nature: the Grand Canyon, the Everglades, the Niagara Falls... and many other wonderful places.

(I didn't have Internet back there, otherwise I just had watched YouTube).

(I didn't have Internet back theren, otherwise I would have just had watched YouTube).

(I didn't have Internet back there, otherwisen, so I just had to watched YouTube).

I also watched TV show 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA.

I also watched TV show called 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA.

I also watched the TV show 'One floored America' ("Одноэтажная Америка"), in which famous Russian TV hosts Vladimir Pozner and Ivan Urgant travelled across the USA.

The show was very exciting too.

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I wanted to do a road trip across the country just like them.

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Many years had passed, when I decided to learn French as I wanted to experience learning a new language from zero.

Many years had passed, whenand I decided to learn French as I wanted to experience learning a new language from zero.

Of course, I became interested in visiting France some day.

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I think it has its unique charm, and it's very pleasant place to be.

I think it has its unique charm, and it's a very pleasant place to be.

I think it has its unique charm, and it's a very pleasant place to be.

I also was a fan of 'Tour De France', so going there to see the route's places would be a nice idea.

I was also was a fan of 'Tour De France', so going there to see the route's places would be a nice idea.

Lately, I took up doing yoga.

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Now I have an intention to visit India and learn more yoga, visit ancient places and feel their atmosphere.

I think India has kind cheerful people, nice food and beautiful nature.

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I think India has kind cheerful people, nice food and a beautiful nature.

For me, there were several places I wanted to go while I was growing up.

For me, there were several places I wanted to go whilen I was growing up.

For me, there were several places I wanted to go to while I was growing up.

Now I have an intention to visit India and learn more yoga, travel to ancient places and feel their atmosphere.

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