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There are many beautiful places in the world , o. One of these places iI want to visit is Roma e.

In English, Roma is called Rome.

Romae is the capital of Italy , Roma . It is known for its ancient history and its culture .

You can replace Rome with 'It' in this case to avoid repetition.

I would like to walk on the old streets and see the places of the rRoman eEmpire, like the Roman fForum and Vatican city .

Since anything that follows like is considered extra information there is usually always a comma "," before like.

I want also to eat the Italyian food, like pasta and pizza and a lot of other delicious dishes .

Visiting Romae is a dream iI hope towill caome true one day in the future .

The City dDream

Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.

There are many beautiful places in the world , and one of theose places iwhich I want to visit is Roma e.

(1) The "and" helps to join the two parts of the sentence more smoothly.
(2) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised.
(3) In English, the name of the city is "Rome".

Romae is the capital of Italy , Roma is known for its ancient history and its culture .

(1) Generally, there is no spacing in front of punctuation like commas and periods.
(2) You can omit the second "Rome is", as it has already been used in front at the start of the sentence.
(3) Similarly, you can also omit the second "its", as it has also already been used before.

I would like to walk along the old streets and see the places of the rRoman eEmpire like the Roman fForum and Vatican cCity .

The names of empires and places are both capitalised.

I want alsoalso want to eat the Italyian food like pasta and pizza and a lot of other delicious dishes .

(1) "I want also to eat" is not necessarily ungrammatical, but it is not common and might sound more literary.
(2) I added "other" because you'd already listed two specific examples of delicious Italian dishes.

Visiting Romae is a dream iI hope tocan caome true one day in the future .