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the drawing test

I practice drawing to enter art collage, but recently, I cannot feel that my skill improve.
My friends who draw on my side maybe pass the exam because they were skillful.
I despair when I look them.
I want to draw well.

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the drawing test

I practice drawing to enter art collaege, but recently, I cannot feel that my skill improve.

My friends who draw on my sidalongside me maybe passed the exam because they were skillful.

I despairfeel hopeless when I look at them.

"Hopeless" is probably more natural, but you can also say "I feel despair..."

I want to draw well.

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I am practiceing drawing to enter art collaege, but recently, I cannodon't feel that my skill is improveing.

Because it is something you are actively doing, you would say "I am practicing" instead of "I practice"

My friends who draw on mythe side maybe pass the exam because they weare skillful.

I was not sure what you meant by "on my side." Maybe you meant "on the side" to say it is a skill they practice often, though this also implies they get paid for it (such as through art commissions).

I despair when I look them.

I want to draw well.

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Great job. Don't despair, you can always get better.

the drawing test


tThe dDrawing tTest

Title capitalization rules

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I practice drawing to enter art collage, but recently, I cannot feel that my skill improve.


I am practiceing drawing to enter art collaege, but recently, I cannodon't feel that my skill is improveing.

Because it is something you are actively doing, you would say "I am practicing" instead of "I practice"

I practice drawing to enter art collaege, but recently, I cannot feel that my skill improve.

My friends who draw on my side maybe pass the exam because they were skillful.


My friends who draw on mythe side maybe pass the exam because they weare skillful.

I was not sure what you meant by "on my side." Maybe you meant "on the side" to say it is a skill they practice often, though this also implies they get paid for it (such as through art commissions).

My friends who draw on my sidalongside me maybe passed the exam because they were skillful.

I despair when I look them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I despairfeel hopeless when I look at them.

"Hopeless" is probably more natural, but you can also say "I feel despair..."

I want to draw well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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