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adichira

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The Dog's Park đŸžïž

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park. I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes. I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„ș when I see them. There's an area where of medium to high class people live. So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.

They're many winner dogs, I think it's a fad. Also, I see each day a dog that I called "the cow" it's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow. It's almost my tall.


El parque de los perros

Vivo al lado de un gran parque, lo llamo el parque de los perros. Tengo una rutina donde cada dĂ­a camino allĂ­ por treinta minutos. Soy una amante de los perros, entonces siempre siento ternura cuando los veo. EstĂĄ es un ĂĄrea donde vive la gente de clase media alta. Entonces estos perros no son comunes, son costosos.

Allí hay muchos perros salchicha, pienso que es una moda. Ademås, cada día veo un perro al que llamo "la vaca", es un gran danés blanco y tiene manchas negras como una vaca. Es casi de mi tamaño.

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The Dog's Park đŸžïž

We don’t say “the dog’s park” in English

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I didn’t change the error with “the dog’s park” here since that’s what you call it

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„șdelighted when I see them. đŸ„ș

the word “touched” means that you’re emotionally moved by something, which seems very out of place here. Some better words would be “delighted” or “in awe”

There's an area where of mediummiddle to high class people live.

We refer to it as “the middle class”, not really the “medium class”

So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.

These adjectives seem a bit odd, but I can’t think of any better ones

They're are many winener dogs, I think it's a fad.

“They’re” is a contraction of the words “they” and “are”, not “there” and “are”

Also, I see each dayevery day I see a dog that I called "the cow" it'. It’s a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

This sentence structure isn’t correct

It's almost myas tall as me.

“It’s almost my tall” makes no sense, but I think you meant it’s almost as tall as you?

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Nice job!

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adichira

Oct. 21, 2025

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Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections. I'm trying to improve.

The Dog's Park đŸžïž

I live next to a big park. Personally, I call it the dog's park.

I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes each day.

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„ș when I see them. đŸ„ș

There's an area where people of medium to high class people live.

SoTherefore, these dogs aren't common, they and are expensive.

They're many winner dogs. In my opinion, I think it's a fad.

Also, I see each day a dog that I called "“the cow" i” every day. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

It's almost my tallheight.

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adichira

Oct. 21, 2025

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Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections.

The Dog's Park đŸžïž

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes.

There's an area where of medium to high middle to upper-class people live.

They're are many winner dogs, but I think it's a fad.

The fact of there being many winner dogs and it being a fad are two different ideas that need to be connected.

Also, I see each dayeveryday I see a dog that I called "tThe cCow" i. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

It's almost myas tall. as I am.

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adichira

Oct. 21, 2025

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Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections.

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touchexcited đŸ„ș when I see them.

There'sIt’s a an area where of medium to high class people live.the salaries are high.

So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.

They're many winnerpurebreed dogs,. I think it's a fad.

Also, I see each day a dog that I called "the cow" it'.” It’s a Wwhite Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

It's almost my tallheight.

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adichira

Oct. 21, 2025

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Hello! Thank you very much for your corrections.

The Dog's Park đŸžïž

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes.

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„ș when I see them.

There's an area where of medium tomiddle and high class people live.

"medium" class is understandable, but generally we'd call it "middle class"

So these dogs aren't common, they a're expensive.

Since you're using the contraction for "aren't" it feels a bit unnatural to suddenly switch to not using contractions

They're many winner dogs, I think it's a fad.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say with this, sorry

Also, I see each day I see a dog that I called "the cow" i. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

This should be split into two sentences.
"I see" should come after "each day"

It's almost myas tall as me.

"almost my tall" doesn't make sense - I believe you were trying to say it is nearly as tall as you

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It's good that you can go to see dogs at the park whenever you like

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adichira

Oct. 21, 2025

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Hello! Yes, it's a good activity for me, it's like loading my happiness.

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The Dog's Park đŸžïž

We don’t say “the dog’s park” in English

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.


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I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I live next to a big park. Personally, I call it the dog's park.

I live next to a big park, I call it the dog's park.

I didn’t change the error with “the dog’s park” here since that’s what you call it

I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have a routine where each day I walk there for thirty minutes each day.

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„ș when I see them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touchexcited đŸ„ș when I see them.

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„ș when I see them. đŸ„ș

I'm a dog lover, so I always feel touched đŸ„șdelighted when I see them. đŸ„ș

the word “touched” means that you’re emotionally moved by something, which seems very out of place here. Some better words would be “delighted” or “in awe”

There's an area where of medium to high class people live.


There's an area where of medium tomiddle and high class people live.

"medium" class is understandable, but generally we'd call it "middle class"

There'sIt’s a an area where of medium to high class people live.the salaries are high.

There's an area where of medium to high middle to upper-class people live.

There's an area where people of medium to high class people live.

There's an area where of mediummiddle to high class people live.

We refer to it as “the middle class”, not really the “medium class”

So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.


So these dogs aren't common, they a're expensive.

Since you're using the contraction for "aren't" it feels a bit unnatural to suddenly switch to not using contractions

So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.

SoTherefore, these dogs aren't common, they and are expensive.

So these dogs aren't common, they are expensive.

These adjectives seem a bit odd, but I can’t think of any better ones

They're many winner dogs, I think it's a fad.


They're many winner dogs, I think it's a fad.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say with this, sorry

They're many winnerpurebreed dogs,. I think it's a fad.

They're are many winner dogs, but I think it's a fad.

The fact of there being many winner dogs and it being a fad are two different ideas that need to be connected.

They're many winner dogs. In my opinion, I think it's a fad.

They're are many winener dogs, I think it's a fad.

“They’re” is a contraction of the words “they” and “are”, not “there” and “are”

Also, I see each day a dog that I called "the cow" it's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.


Also, I see each day I see a dog that I called "the cow" i. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

This should be split into two sentences. "I see" should come after "each day"

Also, I see each day a dog that I called "the cow" it'.” It’s a Wwhite Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

Also, I see each dayeveryday I see a dog that I called "tThe cCow" i. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

Also, I see each day a dog that I called "“the cow" i” every day. It's a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

Also, I see each dayevery day I see a dog that I called "the cow" it'. It’s a White Great Dane, and it has black spots like a cow.

This sentence structure isn’t correct

It's almost my tall.


It's almost myas tall as me.

"almost my tall" doesn't make sense - I believe you were trying to say it is nearly as tall as you

It's almost my tallheight.

It's almost myas tall. as I am.

It's almost my tallheight.

It's almost myas tall as me.

“It’s almost my tall” makes no sense, but I think you meant it’s almost as tall as you?

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