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RioDeMilo

March 31, 2025

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The difficulty in being disciplined

I want and need to improve my English, I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment, I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem, If you know any grammar book movie or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working that would be really useful.
I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life, I been learning how to work mixing standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

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umnobro's avatar
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I want and need to improve my English,. While I feel comfortable explaindiscussing general topics with anyone, although I don'’t feel comfortable talas confident speaking in a more serious environmformal or professional settings. Currently, I landedhave a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbatesd the problem,. If you know any grammar books, movies, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working thatould help me improve how I communicate in a work environment, I would be really usefulappreciate your recommendations.

I just changed a few things so that it could flow a little more naturally :)

I also bought a standing desk, and it'’s been one of the best purchases of my life, II’ve ever made. I’ve been learning how to work mixingbalance standing and sitting, and this desk without being while working, and even though this desk isn’t electric, it still delivers quality and good stabiprovides great stability and quality for my working setup.

Just a few tiny grammar and flow changes :D

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Overall, great effort! Congratulations on your standing desk! I've heard that when you pair those desks with a little walking pad, it's like a match made in heaven. Maybe you could give it a try. As for formal English speaking, I would try to check out something like this: https://www.bbc.co.uk/learningenglish/business-english
it may help if you search online for "Business English" specifically. Hope this helps :D

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The difficulty in being disciplined

Keep in mind that titles are usually capitalized in English.

I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know of any grammar books, movies, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work mixingwith a mix of standing and sitting, and this desk withou, despite not being electric it, still delivers quality and good stabigood stability and quality for my working setup.

Switching "good stability" and "quality" sounds more natural, but I can't really tell you why. :P

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The biggest and easiest change you can make is with your punctuation. If you break up the sentences more, it sounds more natural and is easier to read.

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I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know any grammar books, movies or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I have been learning how to work mixingwhile standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it, still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

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Your English is very good! You should be proud of yourself

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I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talspeaking in a more serious environment, I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know of any grammar books, movies or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working that would be really useful.

I split the first sentence into two sentences since it was a run on sentence.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work mixing standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

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Overall pretty well written!

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I want and need to improve my English, and I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, althoughjust about anyone. However, I don't feel comfortable talspeaking English in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this has exacerbatesd the problem,. If you know any grammar book, movie, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I bought a standing desk, and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work by mixing standing and sitting, and despite this desk withounot being electric, it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

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Good work so far! Commas ( , ) can be tricky to place at times.

Learning the difference between independent and dependent clauses in English sentence will be eye-opening! Sentence can have one or multiple clauses (think of clauses like sections of a sentence).

An independent clause can form a complete thought or statement on its own, while a dependent clause cannot.

Independent clause example:
"I couldn't make it there on time."

Dependent clause example:
"Even though I ran as fast as I could"

Dependent clause are often started with prepositions (words like "and", "for", "but", "yet", "so", "although", "despite", "however", etc.), while independent clauses do not.

Once you learn how to distinguish between independent clauses and dependent clauses, your comma placement will get better with practice.

Here are some good rules:
1: Independent clause followed by a dependent clause = no comma between them. "I couldn't make it there on time even though I ran as fast as I could."

2: Dependent clause followed by an independent clause = a comma between them. "Even though I ran as fast as I could, I couldn't make it there on time."

3: Two independent clauses in the same sentence = a comma between them followed by an appropriate preposition. OR separate the two independent clauses by a period ( . ).
"I ran as fast as I could" + "I couldn't make it there on time" = "I ran as fast as I could, but I couldn't make it on time." OR "I ran as fast as I could. I couldn't make it on time.". The first option sounds more natural when said aloud.

It can be tempting to use a lot of commas before a period ends a sentence, but this can lead to sentences that are too long and become confusing for some natives to read. It can be hard to know just how many commas in one sentence is too much, but practice will make your skills better with time!

The difficulty in being disciplined

The difficulty in being disciplined

Keep in mind that titles are usually capitalized in English.

I want and need to improve my English, I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment, I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem, If you know any grammar book movie or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working that would be really useful.

I want and need to improve my English, and I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, althoughjust about anyone. However, I don't feel comfortable talspeaking English in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this has exacerbatesd the problem,. If you know any grammar book, movie, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talspeaking in a more serious environment, I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know of any grammar books, movies or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working that would be really useful.

I split the first sentence into two sentences since it was a run on sentence.

I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know any grammar books, movies or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I want and need to improve my English,. I feel comfortable explaining general topics with anyone, although I don't feel comfortable talking in a more serious environment,. I landed a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbates the problem,. If you know of any grammar books, movies, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working, that would be really useful.

I want and need to improve my English,. While I feel comfortable explaindiscussing general topics with anyone, although I don'’t feel comfortable talas confident speaking in a more serious environmformal or professional settings. Currently, I landedhave a job where I don't need to use my English skills, and this exacerbatesd the problem,. If you know any grammar books, movies, or series that can further expose me to how I should talk when working thatould help me improve how I communicate in a work environment, I would be really usefulappreciate your recommendations.

I just changed a few things so that it could flow a little more naturally :)

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life, I been learning how to work mixing standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

I bought a standing desk, and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work by mixing standing and sitting, and despite this desk withounot being electric, it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work mixing standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I have been learning how to work mixingwhile standing and sitting, and this desk without being electric it, still delivers quality and good stability for my working setup.

I bought a standing desk and it's been one of the best purchases of my life,. I've been learning how to work mixingwith a mix of standing and sitting, and this desk withou, despite not being electric it, still delivers quality and good stabigood stability and quality for my working setup.

Switching "good stability" and "quality" sounds more natural, but I can't really tell you why. :P

I also bought a standing desk, and it'’s been one of the best purchases of my life, II’ve ever made. I’ve been learning how to work mixingbalance standing and sitting, and this desk without being while working, and even though this desk isn’t electric, it still delivers quality and good stabiprovides great stability and quality for my working setup.

Just a few tiny grammar and flow changes :D

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