Jan. 29, 2021
The difficulties of writing my first journal
I'm very shy, so write my first journal is very intimidating. My biggest fear is misspell all the sentence. Please be gentle in the correction.
The difficulties of writing my first journal
I'm very shy, so writeing my first journal is very intimidating.
My biggest fear is misspelling all the sentence.s.
Please be gentle in thewith your correction.s.
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Well done!! You don’t have to be perfect on your first try. Good job.
Jan. 30, 2021
Thank you!
I'm very shy, so writeing my first journal entry is very intimidating.
Saying "first journal" isn't incorrect, but it isn't great usage since a journal tends to refer to your entire journal/diary not just one entry. So I'd either say: "writing my first journal entry" or "writing in my journal for the first time here.
My biggest fear is misspelling all the sentences.
Please be gentle in thewith your corrections.
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Way to go with your first journal entry! I just wrote my first one too, and understand being nervous and wanting gentle corrections :) Congrats and good luck with your future writing.
Jan. 30, 2021
I didn't know that expression "way to go", now i will add this on my notes. thank you for taking your time to help me
The difficulties of writing my first journal
I'm very shy, so writeing my first journal is very intimidating.
My biggest fear is misspelling all the sentencewords.
Please be gentle inkind with the corrections.
'kind' sounds better here rather than 'gentle'.
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Your first journal entry was brilliant! Well done, keep it up! :)
Jan. 30, 2021
Thank you, i will keep It up every day
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