May 5, 2024
The desired future
I often think about my future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.
Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mater's degree. I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.
I have been always keen on dancing. If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach
The desired future
I often think about my future.
Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.
It is correct to 'plan for the future' rather than to plan the future itself
Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.
I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume.
I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it.
Simple correction is to say 'I haven't started to get ahead in it' (meaning the professional field). You could also drop 'in it' entirely, as this is implied earlier in the sentence. This would leave: '... I haven't started to get ahead'.
I have been always keen on dancing.
If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach
'matter' is the same for singular or plural subjects. E.g. They didn't matter, it didn't matter, the cars didn't matter, etc.
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The desired future |
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I often think about my future. |
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Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future. It is correct to 'plan for the future' rather than to plan the future itself
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Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mater's degree. Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree. |
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I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume. |
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I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it. Simple correction is to say 'I haven't started to get ahead in it' (meaning the professional field). You could also drop 'in it' entirely, as this is implied earlier in the sentence. This would leave: '... I haven't started to get ahead'.
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I have been always keen on dancing. |
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If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If the money didn't matter 'matter' is the same for singular or plural subjects. E.g. They didn't matter, it didn't matter, the cars didn't matter, etc.
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