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Iri_na31

May 5, 2024

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The desired future

I often think about my future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mater's degree. I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.

I have been always keen on dancing. If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

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The desired futurefuture I desire

I often think about my future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

NowCurrently I am still choosingdeciding upon the profession I'din which like to get inmy Mater's degree.

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead inprogress.

Not sure about this one. Progress what’s the first thing that popped into my head that made the sentence make sense

I have been always keen on dancing.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

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Nice! Good luck with the future plans and choosing your masters.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

inspire to inspired

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

mater's to master's

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

added to

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter should be singular

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get ina Master's degree in.

I have been always been keen on dancing.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

TheMy desired future

sounds more natural- 'the' desired future is quite ambiguous

I often think about my future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.

I feel inspired to plan my future

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mamy master's degree in.

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.I am bothered by this/ it bothers me that I don't have a plan for this

'get ahead in' doesn't make sense in this context. I have provided suggestions on what I think makes more sense

I have been always keen on dancing.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter not matters

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Good work! Just a few minor mistakes to be careful about!

The desired future

I often think about my future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

The word "inspire" is only used in that form in certain contexts (For example, "I inspire her." "You inspire him." "They inspire me." "We will inspire them"). When talking about the emotion or feeling of inspiration that one experiences, we always say "inspired" (E.g. "I am inspired" "You were inspired" "They are inspired" etc.)

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get instudy for my Master's degree.

There are a couple different ways you could say this. You could also simply say, "I'm still choosing what I'd like to do for my master's." Either way, you should include the word "my" before "master's"

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

The words "in order" are always followed by "to" in such contexts

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.

You can just say "get ahead". If you want to include the word "in" then you have to specify, in what? For example, "get ahead in life" "get ahead in my career" etc.

I have been always been keen on dancing.

"Always" should be wedged between "have" and "been"

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

When saying that something doesn't matter, "matter" is always singular

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Great job overall!

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Iri_na31

May 23, 2024

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Thank you so much!

The desired future

I often think about my future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

It is correct to 'plan for the future' rather than to plan the future itself

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it.

Simple correction is to say 'I haven't started to get ahead in it' (meaning the professional field). You could also drop 'in it' entirely, as this is implied earlier in the sentence. This would leave: '... I haven't started to get ahead'.

I have been always keen on dancing.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

'matter' is the same for singular or plural subjects. E.g. They didn't matter, it didn't matter, the cars didn't matter, etc.

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Iri_na31

May 23, 2024

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Thanks a million!

The desired future


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TheMy desired future

sounds more natural- 'the' desired future is quite ambiguous

The desired futurefuture I desire

I often think about my future.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.


Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

It is correct to 'plan for the future' rather than to plan the future itself

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

The word "inspire" is only used in that form in certain contexts (For example, "I inspire her." "You inspire him." "They inspire me." "We will inspire them"). When talking about the emotion or feeling of inspiration that one experiences, we always say "inspired" (E.g. "I am inspired" "You were inspired" "They are inspired" etc.)

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.

I feel inspired to plan my future

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

inspire to inspired

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mater's degree.


Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get instudy for my Master's degree.

There are a couple different ways you could say this. You could also simply say, "I'm still choosing what I'd like to do for my master's." Either way, you should include the word "my" before "master's"

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mamy master's degree in.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get ina Master's degree in.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

mater's to master's

NowCurrently I am still choosingdeciding upon the profession I'din which like to get inmy Mater's degree.

I am going to study abroad in order have a more extensive and valuable resume.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

The words "in order" are always followed by "to" in such contexts

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

added to

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.


I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it.

Simple correction is to say 'I haven't started to get ahead in it' (meaning the professional field). You could also drop 'in it' entirely, as this is implied earlier in the sentence. This would leave: '... I haven't started to get ahead'.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.

You can just say "get ahead". If you want to include the word "in" then you have to specify, in what? For example, "get ahead in life" "get ahead in my career" etc.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.I am bothered by this/ it bothers me that I don't have a plan for this

'get ahead in' doesn't make sense in this context. I have provided suggestions on what I think makes more sense

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead inprogress.

Not sure about this one. Progress what’s the first thing that popped into my head that made the sentence make sense

I have been always keen on dancing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been always been keen on dancing.

"Always" should be wedged between "have" and "been"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been always been keen on dancing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach


If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

'matter' is the same for singular or plural subjects. E.g. They didn't matter, it didn't matter, the cars didn't matter, etc.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

When saying that something doesn't matter, "matter" is always singular

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter not matters

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter should be singular

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

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