TheMy desired future My desired future

sounds more natural- 'the' desired future is quite ambiguous

The desired futurefuture I desire The future I desire

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

It is correct to 'plan for the future' rather than to plan the future itself

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

The word "inspire" is only used in that form in certain contexts (For example, "I inspire her." "You inspire him." "They inspire me." "We will inspire them"). When talking about the emotion or feeling of inspiration that one experiences, we always say "inspired" (E.g. "I am inspired" "You were inspired" "They are inspired" etc.)

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspire to plan the future.

I feel inspired to plan my future

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan for the future.

inspire to inspired

Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future. Sometimes it makes me worried, but sometimes I feel inspired to plan the future.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree. Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get instudy for my Master's degree. Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to study for my Master's degree.

There are a couple different ways you could say this. You could also simply say, "I'm still choosing what I'd like to do for my master's." Either way, you should include the word "my" before "master's"

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Mamy master's degree in. I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get my master's degree in.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get ina Master's degree in. Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get a Master's degree in.

Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree. Now I am still choosing the profession I'd like to get in Master's degree.

mater's to master's

NowCurrently I am still choosingdeciding upon the profession I'din which like to get inmy Mater's degree. Currently I am still deciding upon the profession in which like to get my Mater's degree.

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume. I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

The words "in order" are always followed by "to" in such contexts

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume. I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume. I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

added to

I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume. I am going to study abroad in order to have a more extensive and valuable resume.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in it.

Simple correction is to say 'I haven't started to get ahead in it' (meaning the professional field). You could also drop 'in it' entirely, as this is implied earlier in the sentence. This would leave: '... I haven't started to get ahead'.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead.

You can just say "get ahead". If you want to include the word "in" then you have to specify, in what? For example, "get ahead in life" "get ahead in my career" etc.

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead in.I am bothered by this/ it bothers me that I don't have a plan for this I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and I am bothered by this/ it bothers me that I don't have a plan for this

'get ahead in' doesn't make sense in this context. I have provided suggestions on what I think makes more sense

I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to get ahead inprogress. I can't decide what professional field I am interested in and it bothers me that I haven't started to progress.

Not sure about this one. Progress what’s the first thing that popped into my head that made the sentence make sense

I have been always been keen on dancing. I have always been keen on dancing.

"Always" should be wedged between "have" and "been"

I have been always been keen on dancing. I have always been keen on dancing.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If the money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

'matter' is the same for singular or plural subjects. E.g. They didn't matter, it didn't matter, the cars didn't matter, etc.

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If the money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

When saying that something doesn't matter, "matter" is always singular

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If the money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter not matters

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If the money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach

matter should be singular

If the money didn't matters, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach If money didn't matter, I would work as a dancer or a dance coach