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ericou

Oct. 19, 2023

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The definition of pilot

Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentioned flight. In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human being off the ground. Movement other than walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human being failed to execute without any assistance. That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I eager to become a pilot.

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The definition of pilot

Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentioned flight.

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

a human being = one human
human beings = humans in general

Movement other thanLooking at walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human beings failed to execute without any assistance.

It was unclear why the first half of the sentence was there.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

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ericou

Oct. 21, 2023

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thank you.

The definition of pilot

Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentionedal flight.

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not” does not mean merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to thea destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

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Well done.

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JoeTofu

Oct. 20, 2023

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Three people corrected your post and you didn’t bother to thank any of us?

The definition of a pilot.

Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentionded flight.

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

Movement other than walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human beings failed to execute without any assistance.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

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Good job overall! Just a couple of little things I added.

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ericou

Oct. 21, 2023

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thank you.

The definition of pilot


The definition of a pilot.

The definition of pilot

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Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentioned flight.


Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentionded flight.

Based on the definition, a pilot is the one who controls an aircraft to make an intentionedal flight.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human being off the ground.


In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not” does not mean merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to thea destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

In my point of view, a pilot’s meaning is not merely an occupation that transports passengers or freight to the destination, but the only way to get human beings off the ground.

a human being = one human human beings = humans in general

Movement other than walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human being failed to execute without any assistance.


Movement other than walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human beings failed to execute without any assistance.

Movement other thanLooking at walking on the ground and swimming in the water, flying is the only action human beings failed to execute without any assistance.

It was unclear why the first half of the sentence was there.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I eager to become a pilot.


That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

That is what makes flying so special, and that is the main reason I am eager to become a pilot.

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