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b230tri

July 15, 2021

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The default of life is unhappiness

I was told that the default of life is unhappiness. Because we all going to be dead. Sometimes I felt unhappy since I came to this city. There was an another reason that the Covid19 but the point is I am isolated. I don't know what's the exact reason but first, there's no people of my age here. Almost everyone went to the big city to find a job. There're only old people live here. And second I couldn't keep in touch with my friends after they all married or had a kids. It was a big change all of us. It's increased to spend time with my girlfriend, just two of us. I don't know it's normal. I feel It's very hard to meet people and talk to them. I've lost all of my social skills. I quit smoking, I quit drinking. I just spend my time reading a book, studying some history, watching the Netflex. Is it OK? And also I am very scared about world. I am worried about using money. I have very few income and bare saving. I thing it's a big problem. Someone said being worry will change nothing so you don't have to be worry about. but I am still worry about something, everyday. If this whole things are natural in lives, what can I do for next? What's the next step? Is it ok to live like this, like now? Is it depression?

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The default of life is unhappiness

I was told that the default of life is unhappiness.

Because we are all going to be deaddie.

Sometimes I feelt unhappy since I cameat times ever since I've moved to this city.

There was an another reason that thWhile Covid-19 but the point is I amplays a part, I am overall very isolated.

Not sure what you mean, hope this is close.

I doidn't know what's the exacty at first but there are two reason but fs. First, there's no people of my age here.

Almost everyone went to the big city to find a jobs.

There're only old people liveing here.

And sSecond, I couldn't keep in touch with my friends after they allgot married or had a kids.

It was a big change for all of us.

It's increased to spend spend a lot more time with my girlfriend, just the two of us.

I don't know if it's normal.

I feel It's very hard to meet people and talk to them.

I've lost all of my social skills.

I quit smoking, I quit and drinking.

I just spend all my time reading a books, studying some history, and watching the Netfleix.

Is it OK?

And also I am very scared about the world.

I am also worried about using money.

I have very few income and barely any savings.

I thing it's a big problem.

Someone has said that being worry willied changes nothing so you don't have to beshouldn't worry about anything.

bBut I amdon't agree. I still worry about something, everyday.

If this whole things are natural in lives, what can I do for next?

Not sure what you mean here. Can you give me more details on what you're trying to say? I'll try my best to figure out how to phrase it.

What's the next step?

Is it ok to live like this, like for now?

Is it think I might be depression?ed.

Feedback

Hope things get better soon.

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b230tri

July 18, 2021

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The default of life is unhappiness


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I was told that the default of life is unhappiness.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because we all going to be dead.


Because we are all going to be deaddie.

Sometimes I felt unhappy since I came to this city.


Sometimes I feelt unhappy since I cameat times ever since I've moved to this city.

There was an another reason that the Covid19 but the point is I am isolated.


There was an another reason that thWhile Covid-19 but the point is I amplays a part, I am overall very isolated.

Not sure what you mean, hope this is close.

I don't know what's the exact reason but first, there's no people of my age here.


I doidn't know what's the exacty at first but there are two reason but fs. First, there's no people of my age here.

Almost everyone went to the big city to find a job.


Almost everyone went to the big city to find a jobs.

There're only old people live here.


There're only old people liveing here.

And second I couldn't keep in touch with my friends after they all married or had a kids.


And sSecond, I couldn't keep in touch with my friends after they allgot married or had a kids.

It was a big change all of us.


It was a big change for all of us.

It's increased to spend time with my girlfriend, just two of us.


It's increased to spend spend a lot more time with my girlfriend, just the two of us.

I don't know it's normal.


I don't know if it's normal.

I feel It's very hard to meet people and talk to them.


I feel It's very hard to meet people and talk to them.

I've lost all of my social skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I quit smoking, I quit drinking.


I quit smoking, I quit and drinking.

I just spend my time reading a book, studying some history, watching the Netflex.


I just spend all my time reading a books, studying some history, and watching the Netfleix.

Is it OK?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And also I am very scared about world.


And also I am very scared about the world.

I am worried about using money.


I am also worried about using money.

I have very few income and bare saving.


I have very few income and barely any savings.

I thing it's a big problem.


I thing it's a big problem.

Someone said being worry will change nothing so you don't have to be worry about.


Someone has said that being worry willied changes nothing so you don't have to beshouldn't worry about anything.

but I am still worry about something, everyday.


bBut I amdon't agree. I still worry about something, everyday.

If this whole things are natural in lives, what can I do for next?


If this whole things are natural in lives, what can I do for next?

Not sure what you mean here. Can you give me more details on what you're trying to say? I'll try my best to figure out how to phrase it.

What's the next step?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is it ok to live like this, like now?


Is it ok to live like this, like for now?

Is it depression?


Is it think I might be depression?ed.

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