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teachvil

May 31, 2022

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The dealings with things of not our likings in the work

It is non possible to stop or scaping the tides of problematic moments a lot of the peoples who has jobs needs to endure in the duration of 8 hours in the day of work, and I could to confess before the feet of the cross that no avoiding of the problems has come to anyone who has a 9 to 5 gig. In contemplation of the truthing I am giving, open your eyes, the eyes behind your eyes, and remember one times that a few problems was swimming under your boat like sharks smelling blod, a time which they swim with the fin stiff, when they send a message too you than you are food: but you should to remembers that a shark can be a diminute fish if you now swim by the company of megalodons. Now, read these line with uch care; cut the webs in these words, look to the core, understand you must to become megalodon, after this, little shark will no matter much. Try it!

You should to think that I tell a hystory to convert you to megalodonism, but you are years of light too farther; this is too tell you, perhaps you were birthed as food fish, tuna or maccarel, but you able to modificate the DNA in the tides of your blood. All you need to done is think meg, yes? NO, some peoples are born maccarel and swim maccarel for ever and ever. The major of times is because they learn to love to be maccarel: I do not accept or no condemn this thinking. All thinkings are valid in the fresh or salt waters, and no ones has the powers of Neptune to choose which crawls on the bottom of the sea or yet who swims to jumps out of the water with the sun in shines in the horizon.

Now for to the matter whose values much more: what do you do when a peoples corrals a plethora of piranah at work, and takes a shooting at you with it? Should you to splash in franctics and swim away?, maybe. Should you bury yourself like a crab in the bottom, please, if it gives you happiness, proceed to the bottom like the carcass of a fish with no more life. Should you be like the fishes with extremities that exit water for to be in the mud even dough when this could maybe mean to die in pretrified manner when the mud solidifies. I will say go for it, if for ignorance or accepted destiny, do it. How ever, chicken fish have little to nothing scars in their skin. A sardine or a fish sword live and end their life with pristine looks on their skin. The biggest shark in the water no has that priveledge. A shark is born for scars, but a shark has not a monopoly of scars. The only matter is that all the most of the other fishes prefer to choose to escape the pain before the scar imprints on them, but a true monster of the water swims in that direction. Too much in this direction, I invite you to swim next to a megalodon, if you have the caviar that is necessary, and if a little time after, you're head is still on top of your body, open your eyes and see carefully that his skin shines in the light but the pattern results from profound slasherings to the hyde. Swim a little more and see into his eyes. No smile, no grimace, no fun, pure experience forged in tidal storms.

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The dDealings with things of not to our likings in the at work

It is nont possible to stop or scapingend the tides of the problematic momentss that a lot of the peoples who hasith jobs needs to endure during the duration ofir 8 -hours in the day of workday, and I could to confess before the feeoot of thea cross that there's no avoiding of those problems has come tofor anyone who has a 9 to 5 gig.

In cContemplatione of the truthing of what I am givsaying, open your eyes, the eyes behind your eyes, and remember onea times that a few problems was swimming when those problems lurked under your boat like sharks smelling blood, a time whichwhen they swiam with the fin stiff, when theya stiff fin to send you a message too you: thant you are food: but. However, you should to remembers that a shark can beis but a diminutive fish if you now swim byin the company of megalodons.

Now, read these lines with uch care; cut the webs surrounding these words, look into theits core, and understand that you must to become a megalodon, a. After this,at, the little sharks will not matter much.

You should tomight think that I am telling a hystory to convert you to megalodonism, but you are lightyears of light too fartherf; this is too tell you, perhaps you were birthed as food fish, that you might have been born as fish for food, a tuna or a maccakerel, but you able tocan modificatey the DNA in the tides of your blood.

"Megalodonism" isn't really a word, but I'm not sure if that was intentional on your part, so I left it alone.

All you need to done is think mega, yes?

NO,Actually no; some peoples are born as maccakerel and swim as maccakerel for ever and ever.

The majority of the times, it's because they learn to love to bebeing a maccakerel:, but I do not accept or no condemnone this kind of thinking.

All thinkingsschools of thought are valid in the fresh orand salt waters, and no ones has the powers of Neptune to choose whicho crawls onat the bottom of the sea or yet who swims toand jumps out of the water withhere the sun in shines ion the horizon.

Now for to the matter whose valueof who is much more: valuable; what wouldo you do when aif peoples corrals a plethora of piranaha at work, and takes astart shooting at you along with ithem?

Should you to splash in francticsally and swim away?, m Maybe.

Should you bury yourself like a crab inat the bottom, p? Please, if ithat gives you happiness, then proceed to the bottom like the carcass of a fish with no more lifedead fish.

Should you be like the fishes wi in the extremities that exit water for to be, exiting the water to become stranded in the mud, even dthough when this could maybe mean to dieean dying in a pretrified manner when the mud solidifies.?

I will say go for it, if forwhether out of ignorance or accepteding destiny, just do it.

How ever, chickenowardly fish have little to nothing scars ion their skin.

Not really sure if this is what you meant.

A sardine or a fish swordfish live and end their life with pristine looks on their skin.

The biggest shark in the water no has that priveiledge.

A shark is born for scars, but a shark hadoes not have a monopoly ofn scars.

The only matter is that all the most of the other fishes prefer to choose toing escape over the pain before theof a scar's imprints on them, but a true monster of the water swims ins would swim towards that direction.

There's too much in this direction, so I invite you to swim next to a megalodon, i. If you have the caviar that is necessary, and if a little time after, you'reyour head is still on top of your body, a little while later, then open your eyes and seelook carefully that hiow its skin shines in the light but the, at how its patterns resultsed from profound slasherings to theits hyide.

Swim a little more and seelook into hits eyes.

No smile, no grimace, and no fun,; just pure experience forged in tidal storms.

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Kudos for writing such an extended metaphor, but maybe pay more care to the grammar in the future.

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teachvil

June 6, 2022

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Much my oblige to you. A thousand thanks for backfeeding with correctings and commentation. Too, many thanks for recognition with your words.

The dealings with things of not our likings in the work


The dDealings with things of not to our likings in the at work

It is non possible to stop or scaping the tides of problematic moments a lot of the peoples who has jobs needs to endure in the duration of 8 hours in the day of work, and I could to confess before the feet of the cross that no avoiding of the problems has come to anyone who has a 9 to 5 gig.


It is nont possible to stop or scapingend the tides of the problematic momentss that a lot of the peoples who hasith jobs needs to endure during the duration ofir 8 -hours in the day of workday, and I could to confess before the feeoot of thea cross that there's no avoiding of those problems has come tofor anyone who has a 9 to 5 gig.

In contemplation of the truthing I am giving, open your eyes, the eyes behind your eyes, and remember one times that a few problems was swimming under your boat like sharks smelling blod, a time which they swim with the fin stiff, when they send a message too you than you are food: but you should to remembers that a shark can be a diminute fish if you now swim by the company of megalodons.


In cContemplatione of the truthing of what I am givsaying, open your eyes, the eyes behind your eyes, and remember onea times that a few problems was swimming when those problems lurked under your boat like sharks smelling blood, a time whichwhen they swiam with the fin stiff, when theya stiff fin to send you a message too you: thant you are food: but. However, you should to remembers that a shark can beis but a diminutive fish if you now swim byin the company of megalodons.

Now, read these line with uch care; cut the webs in these words, look to the core, understand you must to become megalodon, after this, little shark will no matter much.


Now, read these lines with uch care; cut the webs surrounding these words, look into theits core, and understand that you must to become a megalodon, a. After this,at, the little sharks will not matter much.

Try it!


You should to think that I tell a hystory to convert you to megalodonism, but you are years of light too farther; this is too tell you, perhaps you were birthed as food fish, tuna or maccarel, but you able to modificate the DNA in the tides of your blood.


You should tomight think that I am telling a hystory to convert you to megalodonism, but you are lightyears of light too fartherf; this is too tell you, perhaps you were birthed as food fish, that you might have been born as fish for food, a tuna or a maccakerel, but you able tocan modificatey the DNA in the tides of your blood.

"Megalodonism" isn't really a word, but I'm not sure if that was intentional on your part, so I left it alone.

All you need to done is think meg, yes?


All you need to done is think mega, yes?

NO, some peoples are born maccarel and swim maccarel for ever and ever.


NO,Actually no; some peoples are born as maccakerel and swim as maccakerel for ever and ever.

The major of times is because they learn to love to be maccarel: I do not accept or no condemn this thinking.


The majority of the times, it's because they learn to love to bebeing a maccakerel:, but I do not accept or no condemnone this kind of thinking.

All thinkings are valid in the fresh or salt waters, and no ones has the powers of Neptune to choose which crawls on the bottom of the sea or yet who swims to jumps out of the water with the sun in shines in the horizon.


All thinkingsschools of thought are valid in the fresh orand salt waters, and no ones has the powers of Neptune to choose whicho crawls onat the bottom of the sea or yet who swims toand jumps out of the water withhere the sun in shines ion the horizon.

Now for to the matter whose values much more: what do you do when a peoples corrals a plethora of piranah at work, and takes a shooting at you with it?


Now for to the matter whose valueof who is much more: valuable; what wouldo you do when aif peoples corrals a plethora of piranaha at work, and takes astart shooting at you along with ithem?

Should you to splash in franctics and swim away?, maybe.


Should you to splash in francticsally and swim away?, m Maybe.

Should you bury yourself like a crab in the bottom, please, if it gives you happiness, proceed to the bottom like the carcass of a fish with no more life.


Should you bury yourself like a crab inat the bottom, p? Please, if ithat gives you happiness, then proceed to the bottom like the carcass of a fish with no more lifedead fish.

Should you be like the fishes with extremities that exit water for to be in the mud even dough when this could maybe mean to die in pretrified manner when the mud solidifies.


Should you be like the fishes wi in the extremities that exit water for to be, exiting the water to become stranded in the mud, even dthough when this could maybe mean to dieean dying in a pretrified manner when the mud solidifies.?

I will say go for it, if for ignorance or accepted destiny, do it.


I will say go for it, if forwhether out of ignorance or accepteding destiny, just do it.

How ever, chicken fish have little to nothing scars in their skin.


How ever, chickenowardly fish have little to nothing scars ion their skin.

Not really sure if this is what you meant.

A sardine or a fish sword live and end their life with pristine looks on their skin.


A sardine or a fish swordfish live and end their life with pristine looks on their skin.

The biggest shark in the water no has that priveledge.


The biggest shark in the water no has that priveiledge.

A shark is born for scars, but a shark has not a monopoly of scars.


A shark is born for scars, but a shark hadoes not have a monopoly ofn scars.

The only matter is that all the most of the other fishes prefer to choose to escape the pain before the scar imprints on them, but a true monster of the water swims in that direction.


The only matter is that all the most of the other fishes prefer to choose toing escape over the pain before theof a scar's imprints on them, but a true monster of the water swims ins would swim towards that direction.

Too much in this direction, I invite you to swim next to a megalodon, if you have the caviar that is necessary, and if a little time after, you're head is still on top of your body, open your eyes and see carefully that his skin shines in the light but the pattern results from profound slasherings to the hyde.


There's too much in this direction, so I invite you to swim next to a megalodon, i. If you have the caviar that is necessary, and if a little time after, you'reyour head is still on top of your body, a little while later, then open your eyes and seelook carefully that hiow its skin shines in the light but the, at how its patterns resultsed from profound slasherings to theits hyide.

Swim a little more and see into his eyes.


Swim a little more and seelook into hits eyes.

No smile, no grimace, no fun, pure experience forged in tidal storms.


No smile, no grimace, and no fun,; just pure experience forged in tidal storms.

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