Dec. 22, 2019
I have a tremendous friend which always do works more than the mile he has to. He has a creed who he never breaks, and that is that he is the one first to get to the offices and every times, he is the last one to depart. In regarding his ethics of work, there is never doubting he is considering others’ peoples-needs and he encounters the extra times to provide all the people with the help they could need. Togethering with this, he has constructed a reputation people are recognizing in all the places he is it always happens all the other workers wish to make friendship relations with him, so it is not strange to find him and the others at the pub on Friday in the night at the other side of the street in party, because that is how he be. I have the belief that he learns to be like this when he is a child, and he never stops to perform in this accord.
The chief of the office notices this for a long time, and confided to me and others two workers of the cubicles that my good friend is ascending, and then asks us what we think about the ideas. We have no hesitations, only certainties about these matters. So, we tell him that he merits too be ascended, because he is leader of the pack, and he could to perform like the lion alpha of the office. No other person can to be respected by the cubiclers, because no one more is winning the respect necessitated for such honor, and in the final, he affirms he knows he makes well if he gives him the ascension he thinks he wants to bestow onto him.
The day of the revelation, the people of the office, the peoples of the security, the friends of my good friend, the wife of the chief, and the wife and the family of my good friend reunited in the center of the floor and announced to all the public that this man, which is been working in this office for 3 years with resignation and abnegation, is ascending to higher levels of authority and compromise, and he is now receiving the ascension to branch risk manager. No person could to anticipate he is losing conscience. All every person sees is his eyes are rolling with no control, and his legs like cooked pasta bend, and his arms die a little time and fall to the sides of him, and his face hits the floor of wood. Silence in the room. Silence in the floor. Silence in all the branch.
The wifes and friends begin to cry in desperation, and the chief screams to all that my friend needs resuscitation, and we all look to all, until the lady who’s computer heats too much screams that she has the knowledge of how to perform this maneuver, and she proceeds. She pushes the chest down with her two hands, and opens the mouth, and then his mouth, when a person unbeknownst to all persons there screams that this situation is temporary, but needs no resuscitation because he is clearly having breath, so he screams a request that echoes against all things in the branch: bring Florida water!!!, and a lot to the surprise of all participants in the spectacle this situation is becoming, the cubicler who works to my right runs to his locker and procures the most big bottle of this water I ever seen in the entire time of my life. He hans the stranger the water, he hans it to the resuscitation woman, and she opens the bottle, puts a huge chunk in her hands, motions the hands together, and slaps with gentle hits the face of my good friend who is not returning from his loss of consciousness. Alas, he began to win composure but his tongue is outside of his mouth, and spit is dripping on the sides. She adds more water. He is back.
He is red in the face, his cheeks look like cherrys but he regains the ability to speak, and addressing the peoples he says that he now is understanding too much secrecy we occulted from him, and the he has honor, and that he will live the standard the chief is giving him to help with the mission of the branch, and when the music begins, his wifes begins to dance with him in a manner that is not like dancing, but more like stilts, in the motions of left and right with no rhythmic movements but they look so cute, and all persons in the venue take out phones and recorded in videos, to put on the youtube. Then we all have cheers. We put the glasses of crystal in the air, and give honor in a big welcome to the now ascended manager of the branch, and we all scream hooray, many time at the same time that we pick him from the floor into our hands and shoot him up to the ceiling and catch him, and do that again for many more times.
When we come to work the next Monday, my friend is a loss, our friend is not there anymore. He suffered a transformation in uniform and spirit, and hair and watch, and language and food. The distance he puts between all persons and himself gets bigger and bigger by Tuesday, and by Wednesday he is not taking anymore, and by Thursday we plan the gathering in the pub at the other side of the street as it is usually, and one of us sends an email to him to give him the invitation in the case that he is forgetting by Friday. There is an empty chair at the table in the pub all Fridays ever since.
I have a tremendousn amazing friend whicho always do works more than thegoes the extra mile heat hais tojob.
Tremendous doesn't sound natural unless you're saying " my friend did a tremendous job at work" even then it sounds strange depending onthe context. 'Amazing' is a better choice if you want to match the intensity of 'tremendous'.
Instead of "goes the extra mile", "he works hard at his job" would be a better phrase. This is because you've stated the person is amazing so it is implied that he "goes the extra mile".
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That story was a wild ride. I'm so sad you lost your friend to his promotion.
The day my good friend received his ascenspromotion.
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I have the beliefve that he learnsed to be like this when he iwas a child, and he never stops to perform in this accordped acting in this way since then.
The chief of the office noticesd this for a longover time, and confided toin me and others two workers of the cubicles that my good friend is ascending, and then askstwo others that he was considering promoting my good friend. He asked us what we think about ithe ideas.
We haved no hesitations, only certainties about these matters about it.
So, we tell him that he merits too be ascended,old the chief that my friend deserves a promotion because he is the leader of the pack, and he could to perform like the lion alpha lion of the office.
No other person can to beis so respected by the cubicleremployees, because no one more is winning the respect necessitated for such honor, and ibody else has earned that honor. In the finalend, the affirms he knows he makes well if he gives him the ascension he thinkchief acknowledged that he knows giving my friend the promotion is the wants to bestow onto himbest choice.
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Silence in the room.
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The wifves and friends begian to cry in desperation, and the chief screams to alled that my friend needs resuscitation, and w. We all look to all, until the lady who’s computer heats too muched around at each other until one lady screamsed that she has the knowledge of how to perform this maneuver, and she proceedsknows how to do it.
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, and a lot tTo the surprise of all the participants in the spectacle thise situation ishad becominge, the cubiclerperson who works in the cubicle to my right runsan to his locker and procuresd the most bigbiggest bottle of this water I had ever seen in the entire time of my life.
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When we coame to work the next Monday, my friend is a loss, our friend is not therewas gone. He wasn't himself anymore.
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The distance he puts between all persons and himself getshimself and others grew bigger and bigger by Tuesday,; and by Wednesday he iwas not longer talking anymore,to anyone; and byon Thursday we plan the, which is when we plan our regular gathering inat the pub at the other side of the street as it is usually, andcross the street, one of us sendst him an email to him to give him the invitation in the case that he isinvite him so he wouldn't forgetting by Friday.
There ishas been an empty chair at the table inat the pub allevery Fridays ever since.
The day my good friend received his ascension. The day my good friend received his The day my good friend received his |
I have a tremendous friend which always do works more than the mile he has to. I have a I have a tremendous friend wh I have a Tremendous doesn't sound natural unless you're saying " my friend did a tremendous job at work" even then it sounds strange depending onthe context. 'Amazing' is a better choice if you want to match the intensity of 'tremendous'. Instead of "goes the extra mile", "he works hard at his job" would be a better phrase. This is because you've stated the person is amazing so it is implied that he "goes the extra mile". |
He has a creed who he never breaks, and that is that he is the one first to get to the offices and every times, he is the last one to depart. He has a creed wh He has a creed (wh |
In regarding his ethics of work, there is never doubting he is considering others’ peoples-needs and he encounters the extra times to provide all the people with the help they could need.
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Togethering with this, he has constructed a reputation people are recognizing in all the places he is it always happens all the other workers wish to make friendship relations with him, so it is not strange to find him and the others at the pub on Friday in the night at the other side of the street in party, because that is how he be.
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I have the belief that he learns to be like this when he is a child, and he never stops to perform in this accord. I I have the belief that he learn |
The chief of the office notices this for a long time, and confided to me and others two workers of the cubicles that my good friend is ascending, and then asks us what we think about the ideas. The chief of the office notice The chief of the office notice |
We have no hesitations, only certainties about these matters. We ha We ha |
So, we tell him that he merits too be ascended, because he is leader of the pack, and he could to perform like the lion alpha of the office. So, we t So, we t |
No other person can to be respected by the cubiclers, because no one more is winning the respect necessitated for such honor, and in the final, he affirms he knows he makes well if he gives him the ascension he thinks he wants to bestow onto him. No other person No other person |
The day of the revelation, the people of the office, the peoples of the security, the friends of my good friend, the wife of the chief, and the wife and the family of my good friend reunited in the center of the floor and announced to all the public that this man, which is been working in this office for 3 years with resignation and abnegation, is ascending to higher levels of authority and compromise, and he is now receiving the ascension to branch risk manager. The day of the revelation, the The day of the revelation, the |
No person could to anticipate he is losing conscience. No No |
All every person sees is his eyes are rolling with no control, and his legs like cooked pasta bend, and his arms die a little time and fall to the sides of him, and his face hits the floor of wood.
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Silence in the floor. Silence Silence |
Silence in all the branch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The wifes and friends begin to cry in desperation, and the chief screams to all that my friend needs resuscitation, and we all look to all, until the lady who’s computer heats too much screams that she has the knowledge of how to perform this maneuver, and she proceeds. The wi The wi |
She pushes the chest down with her two hands, and opens the mouth, and then his mouth, when a person unbeknownst to all persons there screams that this situation is temporary, but needs no resuscitation because he is clearly having breath, so he screams a request that echoes against all things in the branch: bring Florida water! She pushe She pushes |
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, and a lot to the surprise of all participants in the spectacle this situation is becoming, the cubicler who works to my right runs to his locker and procures the most big bottle of this water I ever seen in the entire time of my life.
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He hans the stranger the water, he hans it to the resuscitation woman, and she opens the bottle, puts a huge chunk in her hands, motions the hands together, and slaps with gentle hits the face of my good friend who is not returning from his loss of consciousness. He han He han You can only have a chunk of things that are solid, e.g. cheese, bread. |
Alas, he began to win composure but his tongue is outside of his mouth, and spit is dripping on the sides.
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She adds more water.
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He is back.
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He is red in the face, his cheeks look like cherrys but he regains the ability to speak, and addressing the peoples he says that he now is understanding too much secrecy we occulted from him, and the he has honor, and that he will live the standard the chief is giving him to help with the mission of the branch, and when the music begins, his wifes begins to dance with him in a manner that is not like dancing, but more like stilts, in the motions of left and right with no rhythmic movements but they look so cute, and all persons in the venue take out phones and recorded in videos, to put on the youtube. He He |
Then we all have cheers.
Then we all |
We put the glasses of crystal in the air, and give honor in a big welcome to the now ascended manager of the branch, and we all scream hooray, many time at the same time that we pick him from the floor into our hands and shoot him up to the ceiling and catch him, and do that again for many more times. We We |
When we come to work the next Monday, my friend is a loss, our friend is not there anymore. When we c When we c |
He suffered a transformation in uniform and spirit, and hair and watch, and language and food. He He suffered a transformation in uniform and spirit, |
The distance he puts between all persons and himself gets bigger and bigger by Tuesday, and by Wednesday he is not taking anymore, and by Thursday we plan the gathering in the pub at the other side of the street as it is usually, and one of us sends an email to him to give him the invitation in the case that he is forgetting by Friday. The distance he put The distance he puts between |
There is an empty chair at the table in the pub all Fridays ever since. There There |
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