June 16, 2024
The Continuation of my Last Post of Tokyo Vice (78)
I wrote about the series "Tokyo Vice" in my last post.
I wrote about a yakuza member named Sato where he was about to cut off his own finger.
However, luckily he didn't.
The big boss (head boss) showed up and the flow of the story changed.
最後の投稿で、東京Viceについて書きました。
佐藤と言うやくざメンバーが自分の指を切り落とすところだったことについて書きました。
でも、ラッキーなことに彼は、しなくて済みました。
組長が登場して、話の流れが変わりました。
The Continuation of my Last Post ofabout Tokyo Vice (78)
I wrote about the series "Tokyo Vice" in my last post, in which a Yakuza member named Sato was about to cut off his own finger.
Yakuza (proper noun) should be capitalized
I wrote about a yakuza member named Sato where he was about to cut off his own finger.
I combined this sentence with your previous one. See above
However, luckily he didn't.
The big boss (head boss) showed up and the flow of the story changed.
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Sounds like a scary show!
June 19, 2024
Yes, it's quite scary and sometimes uncomfortable, but still interesting!
Thank you for your corrections!
I wrote about the series "Tokyo Vice" in my last post.
I wrote about a yakuza member named Sato where he was about to cut off his own finger.
However, luckily he didn't.
The big boss (head boss) showed up and the flow of the story changed.
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I've heard this was a great series! I want to watch it now :D
June 16, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! It contains lots of graphic violent scenes, which you might find it uncomfortable, but it's still quite interesting.
The Continuation of my Last Post ofabout Tokyo Vice
I wrote about the series "Tokyo Vice" in my last post.
I wrote about a yakuza member named Sato where heo was about to cut off his own finger.
However, luckily he didn't.
The big boss (head boss) showed up and the flow of the story changed.
Feedback
That's very lucky! 😅
June 16, 2024
Thank you for your corrections as always! Big boos and head boss, which sounds better?
June 16, 2024
No problem! I think "head boss" is more common and sounds more natural to me. But "big boss" is OK.
June 16, 2024
Thank you again! I appreciate your help!
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