The TOEIC is coming up TOEIC.

To fulfill not only the standard airline companiesy's standard requirement, but also to reach a competitive score, I signed up for the TOEIC again.

I would have written this as: I signed up for the TOEIC again not only to fulfill my company's requirements, but also to try to beat my old score.

It will be held aton Jan 27th and 28th.

"at" would be correct for a time, but not a date.

Last time I scored 880 in the R/L section.

It's not a bad score, but there areis still some rooms for improvement.

I've been doing mock tests aftersince I decided to take the test again.

"since" is used because it is the reason you are doing mocked tests. "after" is not wrong, but it's not most natural.

With themy performance I did on the mock tests, I assume I will be able to reachscore approximately 950 in the real test.

The R/L section is not the only test I signed up for,. The S/W section is also taking place on the second day.

Writing is the most worrying part in my opinion based on the fact that it's the less practiced skill that I've been doing recently.

Nevertheless, I've participated in an English practice activity for enheancing all skills ofmy English skills.

I hope that via these practices, I'll get some significant achievement and furthermore, increase my likeabilitylihood of learning English.

TheMy coming up TOEIC test

To fulfill nbot onlyh the standard airline companies require butments and also reach a competitive score, I signed up for the TOEIC again.

It will be held aton Jan 27th and 28th.

Last time I scored 880 in the R/L section.

It's not a bad score, but there areis still some rooms for improvement.

I've been doattempting mock tests after I decided to take the test again.

attempt- to try, but not necessary know whether you are going to succeed.

With themy performance I did on the mock test, I assume that I will be able to reach approximatelyscore about a 950 ion the real test.

The R/L section is not the only test I signed up for, S/W section is I am also taking placethe S/W on the second day.

Writing is themy most worrying part in my opinion based on the fact that it's the less practiced skill that I've been doing recentlyI haven't been practicing that as much.

Nevertheless, I've been participated in aing in English practice activity fories to enheancinge all skills of my English skills.

I hope that via these practices, I'll get somachieve significant achiimprovements and furthermore, increase my likeability ofdesire to learning English.

The upcoming up TOEIC

To fulfillIn order to reach not only the standard airline companies require but also reachto obtain a competitive score, I signed up for the TOEIC again.

It will be held aton Jan 27th and 28th.

Last time I scored 880 in the R/L section.

It's not a bad score but there areis still some rooms for improvement.

With themy performance I did on the mock test, I assume I will be able to reach approximately 950 in the real test.

The R/L section is not the only test I signed up for,. The S/W section is also taking place on the second day.

Writing is the most worrying part in my opinion, based on the fact that it's the less practiced skill that I've been doingskill that I have practised less until recently.

“Less practiced skill that I’ve been doing recently” - it’s a bit difficult to follow what you mean here, so I’ve suggested a simpler way to say this.

Nevertheless, I've participated in an English practice activity for enheancing all skills of Englishmy English language skills.

I hope that via these practices, I'll get some significant achiimprovement and futhermore, increase my likeability ofdesire to learning English.

Did you mean to say ‘likeability’? I don’t think this is a word, so maybe say ‘your desire to learn English’ or your ‘appreciation for the English language’?