Dec. 10, 2022
My ex-girlfriend from Shenzhen came to visit me in 2000. When I accompanied her hanging on the street, she was astonished a lot, she said that this city had provided a different feeling for her, many people like her have never experienced a craggy city. She gazed at hundreds of stairs below her foot and said that many more tourists would like to be here because of their different.
Her words came to true after 15 years. One day, my wife told me:"Chongqing is being a must-go city in China because many people show their pictures here on TikTok."
Here are many things we locals are used to it, which are precious to visitors. I list some below:
Along Yangtze Rive, enjoyable climate, temporary capital cultures in World War II, low prices, warm citizens, a special mountain city, good figured girl, and stronger political culture.
Chongqing is a vibrant city now.
The City in which I Live (7)
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Chongqing is a vibrant city now.
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The City in which I Live (7)
My ex-girlfriend (then-girlfriend?) from Shenzhen came to visit me in 2000.
If she was still your girlfriend at the time of that visit, use “then-girlfriend” (当时的女朋友). If she was already your ex-girlfriend at that time, then “ex-girlfriend” is fine.
When I accompanied her hangingwe walked on the streets together, she was astonished a lot, s. She said that this city had providedgiven her a different feeling for her, m. Many people like her have never experienced a craggy city.
“Accompanied” is unnatural in this context. Instead, you could say you did something “with her” or the two of you did something “together.”
“Hang on the street” sounds like you stood around in one area. I assume you walked around.
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Suggestion: …and said that their uniqueness would attract many more tourists to come here.
Her words came to true [after 15 years. / about 15 years later]
When I first read “after 15 years, I thought you meant it happened in 2015, but that’s not possible since Douyin wasn’t released until late 2016, followed by TikTok a year later.
One day, my wife told me: "Chongqing is being anow one of China’s must-go city in Chinaies because many people show their pictures (and videos?) (from) here on TikTok.
TikTok and Douyin are two separate systems. If you write TikTok, it sounds like foreigners are making these TikTok posts, since people in China use Douyin.
TikTok only added “photo mode” quite recently. Before this, few people posted pictures on TikTok, and even now, most posts are videos, not pictures (photos).
Here are many things we locals are used to it,, (but) which are precious to visitors.:
I list some below:
Alongthe picturesque Yangtze River, enjoyable climate, historical culture as the temporary capital cultures ity during World War II, low prices, warm citizens, a special mountain city, good figured girls, and stronger political culture.
“Along Yangtze River” doesn’t fit here because most of the other items in this list consist of an adjective and a noun, but “along Yangtze River” doesn’t have an adjective. You could say “the picturesque Yangtze River,” instead.
Chongqing is a vibrant city now.
The City in whichThat I Live In (7)
The original is grammatical; however, this correction sounds more natural.
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Now I want to visit Chongqing : (
You paint a great picture. I fixed some wording to make it sound more natural and native.
Well done!
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My ex-girlfriend from Shenzhen came to visit me in 2000. My ex-girlfriend (then-girlfriend?) from Shenzhen came to visit me in 2000. If she was still your girlfriend at the time of that visit, use “then-girlfriend” (当时的女朋友). If she was already your ex-girlfriend at that time, then “ex-girlfriend” is fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here are many things we locals are used to it, which are precious to visitors.
Here are many things we locals are used to
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I list some below:
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Along Yantze Rive, enjoyable climate, temparory capital cultures in World War II, low price, warm citizens, special mountain city, good figured girl and stronger political culture. |
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Along Yangtze Rive, enjoyable climate, temporary capital cultures in World War II, low prices, warm citizens, a special mountain city, good figured girl, and stronger political culture.
“Along Yangtze River” doesn’t fit here because most of the other items in this list consist of an adjective and a noun, but “along Yangtze River” doesn’t have an adjective. You could say “the picturesque Yangtze River,” instead. Along the Yangtze Rive, enjoyable climate, temporary capital cultures during World War II, low prices, warm citizens, a special mountain city, good figured |
Chongqing is a vibrant city now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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