The City in which I Llive (4) The City in which I live (4)

The flowers bloom in Spring, it's hot in Summer, yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and light snow in thefalls on the nearby mountains nearby in Winter. The flowers bloom in Spring, it's hot in Summer, yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and light snow falls on the nearby mountains in Winter.

I tried to make the structure of each sentence in the list similar so that it flows better.

The flowers bloom in Spring, it’s hot in Summer, the yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and there is light snow in the mountains nearby in Winter. The flowers bloom in Spring, it’s hot in Summer, the yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and there is light snow in the mountains nearby in Winter.

The flowers bloom in Spring, the sun shines hot in Summer, yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and light snowsnow lightly falls in the mountains nearby in Winter. The flowers bloom in Spring, the sun shines hot in Summer, yellow leaves drop in Autumn, and snow lightly falls in the mountains nearby in Winter.

I modified the sentence for parallel sentence construction.

Chongqing is one of the main three main furnace cities along the Yangtze River. Chongqing is one of the three main furnace cities along the Yangtze River.

Many local elders and kids would usually go to some comparisonsimilarly high sea- level mountain areas in Summer. Many local elders and kids would usually go to some similarly high sea level mountain areas in Summer.

No hyphen is needed for 'sea level.'

Many local elders and kids would usually go to some comparison high sea-levelthe mountain areas in Summer. Many local elders and kids would usually go to the mountain areas in Summer.

Many local elders and kids wouldsenior citizens and children usually go to some comparisonatively high sea-level mountain areas in Summer. Many local senior citizens and children usually go to some comparatively high sea-level mountain areas in Summer.

"Elders" can mean senior states people, too, so I used, "senior citizens" to make it clear.l

Some peasants who live in the mountains smile and are exciting ined every Summer, especially when the city is into scorching hot weather in some years. Some peasants who live in the mountains smile and are excited every Summer, especially when the city is into scorching hot weather in some years.

I think this is what you meant?

Some years, the peasants who live in the mountains smile and are exciting in everyed in Summer, especially when the city is intoexperiencing scorching hot weather in some years. Some years, the peasants who live in the mountains smile and are excited in Summer, especially when the city is experiencing scorching hot weather.

Some peasantsThose who live in the mountains smile and exciting inare very excited every Summer, especially when the city is intoexperiencing scorching hot weather in some years. Those who live in the mountains smile and are very excited every Summer, especially when the city is experiencing scorching hot weather.

"Peasants" is a word we don't use very much any more in the US.

The price of their house for tenants is doubled or even tripled according to the weather forecast. The price of their house for tenants is doubled or even tripled according to the weather forecast.

This is a bit awkward. I would consider moving the last part of your sentence to the beginning.

The price ofrent for their houses for tenantholiday makers is doubled or even tripled accordepending to on the weather forecast. The rent for their houses for holiday makers is doubled or even tripled depending on the weather forecast.

The price ofto rent their house for tenants is doubled or even tripled according to the weather forecast. The price to rent their houses is doubled or even tripled according to the weather forecast.

There is a famous circle latitude located in the north 30 of the equator,; any creatures around the latitude are living better and more active than in the other places on earth. There is a famous circle latitude located in the north 30 of the equator; any creatures around the latitude are living better and more active than in the other places on earth.

Two complete clauses separated by a comma is a comma splice.

There is a famous circle latitude located in the north 30 degrees of the equator, any creatures around theat latitude are livinge better and are more active than in theany other places on earth. There is a famous circle latitude located in the north 30 degrees of the equator, any creatures around that latitude live better and are more active than in any other place on earth.

There is a famous circle of latitude located in the north 30 of the equator, a. Any creatures around the latitude are livinglive better and are more active than in the other places on eEarth. There is a famous circle of latitude located in the north 30 of the equator. Any creatures around the latitude live better and are more active than in other places on Earth.

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Chongqing is situated oin this important latitude. Chongqing is situated in this important latitude.

The geographic location of China also has more privileprovides more benefits/ advantages than all the other countries. The geographic location of China also provides more benefits/ advantages than the other countries.

Four seasons a year in my hometown isare distinctive. Four seasons a year in my hometown are distinctive.

To sound more natural, you could try 'My hometown has four distinctive seasons.'

FourEach seasons a of the year in, my hometown is distinctive.looks different. Each season of the year, my hometown looks different.

Four seasons a year in my hometown isIn my hometown, the four seasons are distinctive. In my hometown, the four seasons are distinct.

This sounds more natural in the US.

But as we know god is fair to everyone, and he would not give everything which is the best for you. But as we know god is fair to everyone, and he would not give everything which is the best for you.

I feel like 'god' should be capitalized, but I'm unsure. I think it might depend on which one you're referring to. In this case, I fixed the comma splice by adding a conjunction after the comma.

But as we know gGod is fair to everyone, he would not give everything which is the best for you. But as we know God is fair to everyone, he would not give everything which is the best for you.

This sentence is unclear. Did you want to say he would not give everything good to only some people? Or he gives everyone something that is good?

But as we know, god is fair to everyone, . They/he/she would not give everything which is the best for you. But as we know, god is fair to everyone. They/he/she would not give everything which is the best for you.