Dec. 6, 2022
The City in which I live (2)
Chongqing is a mountain city, The drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers because they have experienced too many challenges on the cliff roads. Before the People's Republic of China was established in 1949, it was the temporary capital at that time. So starting in the 1940s, many underground dugout shelters have been built during World War Two.
In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city. And dispersed into the mountains nearby. Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here, of course, they must obey their leader's order, I don't think most of them were volunteers.
Some of them were involved in a top-secret military project - the world's largest tunnel structure which was exposed to the public in 2002 and opened to tourists in 2010. Named 816 Underground Nuclear Plant.
The City in which I live (2)
Chongqing is a mountain city,. The drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers because they have experienced too with the many challenges onf the cliff roads.
Before the People's Republic of China was established in 1949, it was the temporary capital at that time.
So, starting in the 1940s with World War II, many underground dugout shelters have been built during World War Twowere built.
In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city and dispersed into the mountains nearby.
And dispersed into the mountains nearby.
Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here because, of course, they must obey their leader's order, so I don't think most of them were volunteers.
Some of them were involved in a top-secret military project - the world's largest tunnel structure which was exposed to the public in 2002 and opened to tourists in 2010.
NamedIt's named the 816 Underground Nuclear Plant.
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とても面白そうですね。教えてくれてありがとうございました！
Dec. 7, 2022
添削してくれてありがとう。:-)
Chongqing is a mountain city,. The drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers because they have experienced too many challenges on the cliff roads.
You could also say, "Employers look favourably upon drivers from Chongqing because..."
Before the People's Republic of China was established in 1949, it was the temporary capital at that time.
So starting in the 1940s, many underground dugout shelters have been built during World War TwoIn the 1940s, during World War Two, many underground dugout shelters were built.
Past simple as the action has been completed.
It makes more sense to have both time indicators together in the sentence
In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city and dispersed into the mountains nearby.
And dispersed into the mountains nearby.
Joined onto the sentence before as "and" cannot begin a sentence.
Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here, o. Of course, they musthad to obey their leader's order, and I don't think most of them were volunteers.
Some of them were involved in a top-secret military project - the world's largest tunnel structure, which was exposed to the public in 2002 and opened to tourists in 2010.
NamedIt is called / It's name is the 816 Underground Nuclear Plant.
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Very nice to learn about Chongqing, I didn't know anything about the city before. You have a very good command of grammar and vocabulary. Most of my corrections are quite strict!
Dec. 7, 2022
Thank you very much!
I will avoid using "and" to start a sentence. :-)
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So, Chongqing is a totally migration city that is different from most of the inner cities in China. |
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Chongqing is a mountain city, they say that drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers. |
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Before the People's Republic of China was established in 1949, it was the temporary capital at that time. Before the People's Republic of China was established in 1949, it was the temporary capital This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So starting in the 1940s, many underground dugout shelters have been built during World War Two.
Past simple as the action has been completed. It makes more sense to have both time indicators together in the sentence So, starting in the 1940s with World War II, many underground dugout shelters |
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In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city. In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city and dispersed into the mountains nearby. In the 1960s, in order to prepare for a nuclear war with the former Soviet Union, many military factories were transferred to this city and dispersed into the mountains nearby. |
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And dispersed into the mountains nearby.
Joined onto the sentence before as "and" cannot begin a sentence.
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Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here, of course, they must obey their leader's order, I don't think most of them were volunteers. Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here Many experts in various fields came to the city and lived here because, of course, they must obey their leader's order |
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Some of them were involved in a top-secret military project - the world's largest tunnel structure which was exposed to the public in 2002 and opened to tourists in 2010. Some of them were involved in a top-secret military project - the world's largest tunnel structure, which was exposed to the public in 2002 and opened to tourists in 2010. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Named 816 Underground Nuclear Plant.
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Chongqing is a mountain city, The drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers, because they experienced too much challenges in the cliff roads. |
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Chongqing is a mountain city, The drivers from this city are more welcomed by employers because they have experienced too many challenges on the cliff roads. Chongqing is a mountain city You could also say, "Employers look favourably upon drivers from Chongqing because..." Chongqing is a mountain city |
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