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Tammy

July 21, 2024

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The child in me

According to Stefanie Stahl's book "The Child in You", the first thing to bring out your authentic self is to discover your shadow child.

In the book, the shadow child encompasses our negative beliefs and associated oppressive feelings of grief, fear, helplessness, or anger. And the sun child embodies our positive influences and feelings.

During my reading of this chapter, I recalled many events from my childhood. Some of them belong to the shadow child, and some belong to the sun child.

Those shadow ones make me feel so sad for my younger self, and at the same time, I find that my childhood self is much stronger and more tenacious than my current self.

If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for her. And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive and motivated even in very bad situations.


斯蒂芬妮·斯塔尔在《你内心的孩子》一书中说,要想展现出真实的自己,首先要发现你的阴影小孩。

在这本书中,阴影小孩包含了我们的消极信念和相关的压抑情绪,如悲伤、恐惧、无助或愤怒。阳光小孩体现了我们积极的影响和情感。

在我读这一章的时候,我想起了童年的许多事情。有些属于阴影小孩,有些属于阳光小孩。

那些阴影的让我为小时候的自己感到难过,同时,我发现童年的自己比现在的自己坚强得多、顽强得多。

如果能穿越时空,我想拥抱那个小人儿,并告诉她,她一直做得很好,因为没有人这样做过。我还要感谢她即使在非常糟糕的情况下也能保持好奇心和积极性。

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The child in me.

Or "The Child in Me"

According to Stefanie Stahl's book "The Child in You", the first thing (you need to do) to bring out your authentic self is to discover your "shadow child".

Since shadow child is not a common phrase, we put it in quotation marks the first time it is mentioned.

In the book, the shadow child encompasses our negative beliefs and associated oppressive feelings of grief, fear, helplessness, or anger.

And the (Conversely / On the contrary), the "sun child" embodies our positive influences and feelings.

During myWhile reading of this chapter, I recalled many events from my childhood.

Some of them belong to the shadow child, and some belong to the sun child.

If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for hertold her that at the time.

Or "If I could travel back in time".

And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive, and motivated even in very bad situations.

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Tammy

July 22, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections and feedback! I learned a lot from them.

Have a nice day!

The child in me

According to Stefanie Stahl's book, "The Child in You", the first thingin order to bring out your authentic self is toyou must first discover your shadow child.

In the book, the shadow child encompasses our negative beliefs and associated oppressive feelings of grief, fear, helplessness, or anger.

And the sun child embodies our positive influences and feelings.

During my reading of this chapter, I recalled many events from my childhood.

Some of them belong to the shadow child, and some belong to the sun child.

Those shadow ones make me feel so sad for my younger self, and at the same time, I find that my childhood self is much stronger and more tenacious than my current self.

If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for her.else told her that.

And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive and motivated even in very bad situations.

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Very well written.

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Tammy

July 22, 2024

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Thank you!

It's really an impressive book. I spent a lot of time on it lately.

The child in me


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The child in me.

Or "The Child in Me"

According to Stefanie Stahl's book "The Child in You", the first thing to bring out your authentic self is to discover your shadow child.


According to Stefanie Stahl's book, "The Child in You", the first thingin order to bring out your authentic self is toyou must first discover your shadow child.

According to Stefanie Stahl's book "The Child in You", the first thing (you need to do) to bring out your authentic self is to discover your "shadow child".

Since shadow child is not a common phrase, we put it in quotation marks the first time it is mentioned.

In the book, the shadow child encompasses our negative beliefs and associated oppressive feelings of grief, fear, helplessness, or anger.


In the book, the shadow child encompasses our negative beliefs and associated oppressive feelings of grief, fear, helplessness, or anger.

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And the sun child embodies our positive influences and feelings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And the (Conversely / On the contrary), the "sun child" embodies our positive influences and feelings.

During my reading of this chapter, I recalled many events from my childhood.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During myWhile reading of this chapter, I recalled many events from my childhood.

Some of them belong to the shadow child, and some belong to the sun child.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Those shadow ones make me feel so sad for my younger self, and at the same time, I find that my childhood self is much stronger and more tenacious than my current self.


Those shadow ones make me feel so sad for my younger self, and at the same time, I find that my childhood self is much stronger and more tenacious than my current self.

If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for her.


If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for her.else told her that.

If I could time travel, I would like to hug that little person and tell her that she has been doing so well, because nobody did that for hertold her that at the time.

Or "If I could travel back in time".

And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive and motivated even in very bad situations.


And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive and motivated even in very bad situations.

And I also want to thank her for staying curious, positive, and motivated even in very bad situations.

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