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sachisachi

July 25, 2025

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The Character Zenitsu From the Demon Slayer (130)

I'm going to write about why I got hooked the anime Demon Slayer.

Two years ago, I dropped watching it because I wasn't hooked, but this time I decided to watch it throughout season 1, anyway.

However, season 1 has 26 episodes, which is quite long.

Honestly, I didn't really find it interesting, but I just kept watching it every day.

Then, I realized I somehow grew to like it.

Maybe it's because I found the character Zenitsu interesting.

He whines and cries easily, but for some reason, he is the character you can't hate.


どうしてアニメ「鬼滅の刃」にはまったかについて書きます。

二年前は、全くはまらなくて見るのをやめてしまいましたが、今回はとにかくシーズン1を全部見てみようと思いました。

でも、シーズン1は26話もあって、かなり長いんですよ。

あまり面白いと思わなかったんですが、毎日ただひたすら見続けました。笑

それで、なんとなく面白くなってきました。

多分、善逸というキャラクターが面白かったからかな。

そのキャラクターは、すぐ弱音を吐くし、泣くんですが、なんとなく憎めないキャラです。

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The Character Zenitsu Ffrom the Demon Slayer

I'm going to write about why I got hooked the animon the Demon Slayer anime.

more natural

Two years ago, I drstopped watching it because I wasn't hookinterested, but this time I decided to watch it throughout season 1, anywayall of season 1 (or all of the first season).

However, season 1 has 26 episodes, which is quite long.

Honestly, I didn't really find it interesting, but I just kept watching it every day.

Then, I realized Ithat somehow I grew to like it.

Maybe it's because I found the character Zenitsu interesting.

He whines and cries easily, but for some reason, he is the character you can't hate.

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Glad to hear you are enjoying 鬼滅の刃!!!!

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sachisachi

July 25, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!
I've been really enjoying Demon Slayer!

The Character Zenitsu Ffrom the Demon Slayer

"the" is unnecessary

I'm going to write about why I got hooked on the anime "Demon Slayer."

usually, titles would be italicized or put in quotations or underlined

Two years ago, I dropped watching it because I wasn't hooked, but this time I decided to watch it throughout sSeason 1, anyway.

I capitalized Season 1 because it is basically its name. Something similar happens with book titles: https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/52640/correct-form-of-a-chapter-reference

However, sSeason 1 has 26 episodes, which is quite long.

Honestly, I didn't really find it interesting, but I just kept watching it every day.

Then, I realized I somehow grew to like it.

Maybe it's because I found the character Zenitsu interesting.

He whines and cries easily, but for some reason, he is the character you can't hate.

Feedback

Written very clearly, even the capitalization thing is minor and doesn't affect the reader's understanding

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sachisachi

July 25, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

The Character Zenitsu From the Demon Slayer


The Character Zenitsu Ffrom the Demon Slayer

"the" is unnecessary

The Character Zenitsu Ffrom the Demon Slayer

I'm going to write about why I got hooked the anime Demon Slayer.


I'm going to write about why I got hooked on the anime "Demon Slayer."

usually, titles would be italicized or put in quotations or underlined

I'm going to write about why I got hooked the animon the Demon Slayer anime.

more natural

Two years ago, I dropped watching it because I wasn't hooked, but this time I decided to watch it throughout season 1, anyway.


Two years ago, I dropped watching it because I wasn't hooked, but this time I decided to watch it throughout sSeason 1, anyway.

I capitalized Season 1 because it is basically its name. Something similar happens with book titles: https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/52640/correct-form-of-a-chapter-reference

Two years ago, I drstopped watching it because I wasn't hookinterested, but this time I decided to watch it throughout season 1, anywayall of season 1 (or all of the first season).

However, season 1 has 26 episodes, which is quite long.


However, sSeason 1 has 26 episodes, which is quite long.

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Honestly, I didn't really find it interesting, but I just kept watching it every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Honestly, I didn't really find it interesting, but I just kept watching it every day.

Then, I realized I somehow grew to like it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, I realized Ithat somehow I grew to like it.

Maybe it's because I found the character Zenitsu interesting.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He whines and cries easily, but for some reason, he is the character you can't hate.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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The Character Zenitsu From the Demon Slayer (130)


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