Aug. 4, 2021
The Carsickness
There were few private cars in my town when I was a child. There were few bus to transport from town to town as well. Therefore, I seldom took a bus. I was carsick when I took a bus occasionally.
I can remember clearly that I visited my little anutie who lived in the near town. I went there by bus with my mother. I vomited in the bus. When I came back and got off the bus, I heard that my mother spoke aloud to remind me that I had lost my way to home. I was about 8 years old at that time.
When I was 14, I got the chance to take an English contest in the city. My headmaster drove a van to carry us there. In case of being carsick, I took a pill before getting on the van. The headmaster drove very fast, but I felt nothing uncomfortable. I thought the pill had woeked. The contest began soon which would last two hours. I kept answering the paper when I suddenly woke up in the halfway. It was so weird that I would fall asleep when I was taking the contest. What was worst that I hardly stayed awake in the last hour. As a result, I couldn't complete my paper. I had no idea why this would happen. A few days later, I realized that it was the pill. I had never taken the pill before. Some people told me that the pill would work, so I took it. I forgot to ask when to take the pill and how long it would work. So I fell asleep in two hours after taking the pill. Without surprise, I failed in the contest.
Sooner, I went to high school. I began to live in the dormitory and went home by bus about once a month. Several months later, I got rid of carsickness unexpectedly.
As there are more and more cars in the town, I seldom take a bus. Thus when I went to the city by bus, I got sick again.
The Cars Sickness
There were few private cars in my town when I was a child.
There were few bus to transportroutes from town to town as well.
Therefore, I seldom took a bus.
I was On the occarsick wheon I took a bus occasionally., I became motion sick.
"Car sick" is generally used when inside a car. Otherwise, it's motion sickness.
I can remember clearly that I was visiteding my little anuntie who lived in the nearighboring town.
Swap "little auntie" for "youngest auntie" if you meant her age.
I went there by bus with my mother.
I vomited in the bus.
When I came backwe returned and got off the bus, I heard that my mother spoke aloud to remind me that I had lost myremember hearing my mother say I was walking the wrong way to home.
I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you mean by "I had lost my way home". It doesn't work with the rest of the sentence.
**Edited the correction!
I was about 8 years old at that time.
When I was 14, I got the chance to take an English writing contest in the city.
"English contest" needs to be more specific to make sense. Writing contest, spelling contest, literature contest etc
My headmaster drove a van to carry us there.
Or: "My headmaster drove us there in a van."
In case of being carsick, I took a pill before getting oin the van.
The headmaster drove very fast, but I felt nothingwas not uncomfortable.
I thought the pill had woerked.
The contest began soon after which would last two hours.
I kept answering the paperquestions when I suddenly woke up in the halflway.
It was so weird that I would fall asleep whilen I was taking theparticipating in a contest.
What was worstThe worst part was that I hardly stayed awake in the last hour.
As a result, I couldn't complete my paper.
I had no idea why this wouldat happened.
A few days later, I realized that it was the pill.
I had never taken theat pill before.
Some people told me that the pill would workhelp, so I took it.
I forgot to ask when to take the pill and how long it would work.
So I fell asleep in two hours after taking the pill.
WithoutNo surprise, I failed inlost the contest.
SoonLater, I went to high school.
I began to live in the dormitory and went home by bus about once a month.
Several months later, I got riwas unexpectedly cured of my car sickness unexpectedly.
As there are more and more cars in the town, I seldom take a bus.
Thus when I went to the city by bus, I got sick again.
Aug. 6, 2021
When I came backwe returned and got off the bus, I heard that my mother spoke aloud to remind me that I had lost myremember hearing my mother say I was walking the wrong way to home.
I walked the wrong way to go home.
|
I vomited in the bus. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The Carsickness
|
|
There were few private cars in my town when I was a child. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
There were few bus to transport from town to town as well. There were few bus |
|
Therefore, I seldom took a bus. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I was carsick when I took a bus occasionally.
"Car sick" is generally used when inside a car. Otherwise, it's motion sickness. |
|
I can remember clearly that I visited my little anutie who lived in the near town. I Swap "little auntie" for "youngest auntie" if you meant her age. |
|
I went there by bus with my mother. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When I came back and got off the bus, I heard that my mother spoke aloud to remind me that I had lost my way to home. When I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you mean by "I had lost my way home". It doesn't work with the rest of the sentence. **Edited the correction! |
|
I was about 8 years old at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When I was 14, I got the chance to take an English contest in the city. When I was 14, I got the chance to take an English writing contest in the city. "English contest" needs to be more specific to make sense. Writing contest, spelling contest, literature contest etc |
|
My headmaster drove a van to carry us there. My headmaster drove a van to carry us there. Or: "My headmaster drove us there in a van." |
|
In case of being carsick, I took a pill before getting on the van. In case of being carsick, I took a pill before getting |
|
The headmaster drove very fast, but I felt nothing uncomfortable. The headmaster drove very fast, but I |
|
I thought the pill had woeked. I thought the pill had wo |
|
The contest began soon which would last two hours. The contest began soon after which would last two hours. |
|
I kept answering the paper when I suddenly woke up in the halfway. I kept answering the |
|
It was so weird that I would fall asleep when I was taking the contest. It was so weird that I would fall asleep while |
|
What was worst that I hardly stayed awake in the last hour.
|
|
As a result, I couldn't complete my paper. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I had no idea why this would happen. I had no idea why th |
|
A few days later, I realized that it was the pill. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I had never taken the pill before. I had never taken th |
|
Some people told me that the pill would work, so I took it. Some people told me that the pill would |
|
I forgot to ask when to take the pill and how long it would work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
So I fell asleep in two hours after taking the pill. So I fell asleep |
|
Without surprise, I failed in the contest.
|
|
Sooner, I went to high school.
|
|
I began to live in the dormitory and went home by bus about once a month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Several months later, I got rid of carsickness unexpectedly. Several months later, I |
|
As there are more and more cars in the town, I seldom take a bus. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Thus when I went to the city by bus, I got sick again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium