Feb. 17, 2024
The other day, I discovered The Carpenters on Spotify. Since then, I’ve been listening to them a lot. Though I’d heard of them and known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs.
When I first listened to them, they blew my mind! I didn’t expect them to be so good. My favorites are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More and Superstar. The music is magical and soothing. It makes me mildly sad and feel nostalgic for a time I never lived in. It’s unfortunate that Karen Carpenter died so young. I wish I traveled back to the 1970s and went to the concert.
The Carpenters
The other day, I discovered The Carpenters on Spotify.
Since then, I’ve been listening to them a lot.
Though/ Although I’d heard of them and had known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs.
When I first listened to them, they blew my mind!
I didn’t expect them to be so good.
My favorite tracks/ songs of theirs are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More and Superstar.
Their music is magical and soothing.
Nothing wrong with thr first one, but their gives it a human attachment. Not just the music, but Carpenters (their) music.
It makes me mildly sad and feel nostalgic for a time I never lived in.
It’s unfortunate that Karen Carpenter died so young.
I wish I traveled back to the 1970s and went to thea concert. of hers.
The Carpenters
The other day, I discovered The Carpenters on Spotify.
Since then, I’ve been listening to them a lot.
When I first listened to them, they blew my mind!
I didn’t expect them to be so good.
My favorites are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More, and Superstar.
The Oxford comma is optional but I personally prefer to always use it. It can change the meaning slightly, for example, maybe people unfamiliar with the carpenters will think the song is called “yesterday once more and superstar”(though I think people can probably tell that’s not the case by common sense haha)
The music is magical and soothing.
It makes me mildly sad and feel nostalgic for a time I never lived in.
It’s unfortunate that Karen Carpenter died so young.
I wish I could traveled back to the 1970s and wentgo to their concert.
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Basically perfect!
Though I’d heard of them and (had) known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs.
It makes me mildly sad and feel nostalgic for a time I've never lived in.
I wish I could traveled back to the 1970s and wentgo to their concert.
It's impossible to travel back to the 1970's, so it's better to use a conditional construction, i.e. "I wish I could...", "I wish I could/would have...". The construction you used implies that it was possible for you to travel back to the 1970's, which you didn't in fact do.
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Very good text! There were almost no mistakes, and the few mistakes that you made were very minor.
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The other day, I discovered The Carpenters on Spotify. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Since then, I’ve been listening to them a lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Though I’d heard of them and known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs. Though I’d heard of them and (had) known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs. Though/ Although I’d heard of them and had known that there was a lot of hype around them, I’d never listened to any of their songs. |
My favorites are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More and Superstar. My favorites are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More, and Superstar. The Oxford comma is optional but I personally prefer to always use it. It can change the meaning slightly, for example, maybe people unfamiliar with the carpenters will think the song is called “yesterday once more and superstar”(though I think people can probably tell that’s not the case by common sense haha) My favorite tracks/ songs of theirs are (They Long to be) Close to You, Yesterday Once More and Superstar. |
The music is magical and soothing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Their music is magical and soothing. Nothing wrong with thr first one, but their gives it a human attachment. Not just the music, but Carpenters (their) music. |
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It’s unfortunate that Karen Carpenter died so young. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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