Feb. 27, 2022
the capital paris fluent
Paris under water it is a danger the eiffeltower destroy . The primary schools broken . The government says that all the city leave . The majority has go the city but the rest of the people would you like go. But what could you do it was a derrible famine. The most has be terrified scare . But on the end we they make the proper and we all could leave.
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Paris is under water it, there is a danger that the eEiffel tower will be destroyed .
The primary schools broken are damaged.
Broken is more suitable for tools, etc.
The government says that all the city should leave .
Or "all people should leave"
The majority has goleft the city but the rest of the people would you like gostay.
Not sure I understood your meaning here.
But what could you do it was a dterrible faminedisaster.
The most has bMost people were terrified scare .
But onat the end we they makde the proper call and we all could leave.
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Not bad but too many pronouns.
the capital paris fluent
not sure what "fluent" means. flooded?
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The primary schools are broken .
The government says that all the city must leave .
The majority hasof people have to go the city but the rest of the people would you like goto stay.
not sure what it intended here
But what could you do i? It was a dterrible famine.
The most has bMost people are terrified scare .
But oin the end we they makde the properit correct, and we all could all leave.
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the capital paris fluent the capital paris fluent not sure what "fluent" means. flooded? the capital |
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Paris under water it is a danger the eiffeltower destroy . Paris is under Paris is under water |
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The primary schools broken . The primary schools are broken The primary schools Broken is more suitable for tools, etc. |
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The government says that all the city leave . The government says that all the city must leave The government says that all the city should leave . Or "all people should leave" |
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The majority has go the city but the rest of the people would you like go. The majority not sure what it intended here The majority has Not sure I understood your meaning here. |
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But what could you do it was a derrible famine. But what could you do But what could you do it was a |
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The most has be terrified scare .
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