Jan. 24, 2022
The Cable Car Journey
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel by cable car, above the docks. In Barcelona there are two cable cars. The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and go up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top. The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain. Could seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not. The two, have independent routes. There are two towers made in iron making up in a big and strong structure. The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour. We had began the travel in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route. The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and does't stop. The trip follow to finish in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain. All this tour last about ten minutes. Then we was walking by the park and went to botanic garden that is close, at side. About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travel to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip. The experience is it worth.
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The Cable Car Journey
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel by cable car,ing above the docks by cable car.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter of the two and goes up by the Montjuïc mountain to thea castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
CouldIt might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
There are two towers made inof iron making up in, and they create a big and strong structure.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began theour travel ins at the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
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All tThis tour last about ten minutes.
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About three hours later, we went back to the cable car to domake the return travel to "ip to the Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
The experience iwas it worth.
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Jan. 25, 2022
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The Journey by Cable Car Journey
We spent yYesterday Sunday, we spent the morning in a travelling by cable car, above the docks.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and goes up byalong the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
CIt could seemappear that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
There are two towers made in iron making up init a big and strong structure.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began the travel infrom the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at halfway, but at present it is closed and the cable car does' not stop. there.
The trip follow to finishs in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe whole tour last about ten minutes.
Then we was walking bylked to the park and went to botanic garden that is close, at side.are next to each other.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
The experience is itwas worth it.
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Well done. Well explained.
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travelling by cable car, above the docks.
In Barcelona, there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and go up byof the two and runs up the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, which in the Montjuïc mountain.
CouldIt might seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two, have independent routes.
There are two iron towers made in iron making up inthat make up a big and strong structure.
We had began the traveling in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway, point but at present it is closed and doesn't stop.
The trip follow to finishended in Miramar station, in the Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe whole tour lasted about ten minutes.
Then we was walkinglked by the park and went to the botanic garden that is close, at to its side.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish, so that we could end the trip.
The experience is it worth it.
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Very good!
Jan. 25, 2022
Thanks.
We spent yesterday Sunday morning in a travel bying in a cable car, above the docks.
No need to say Sunday AND yesterday here, just one is enough. No comma needed before "above the docks" either.
In Barcelona there are two cable cars.
The Montjuïc Cable Car is the shorter and goone and it goes up by the Montjuïc mountain to the castle at the top.
The port cable car is the longer of the two, connecting the "Barceloneta" neighborhood with Miramar, in the Montjuïc mountain.
CIt could seem that the two cable cars are connected, but they are not.
The two,y both have independent routes.
No comma needed here either
There are two iron towers made in iron making up in a big and strong structure.
You can use the word "iron" to describe the towers.
The cabins are painted in a vivid red colour.
We had began the traveljourney in the "Sant Sebastià" tower at the beginning of the route.
I think journey sounds more natural here.
The cable car crosses the "Jaume I" tower which is at the halfway, but at pres point, but currently it is closed and doesn't stop.
The trip follow to finishes up in Miramar station, in Montjuïc mountain.
All thisThe entire tour lasts about ten minutes.
Then we wasere walking by the park and went to botanical garden that is closenearby, at side.
About three hours later we went back to the cable car to do the return travelreturn to "Sant Sebastià" tower and this way, to finish the trip.
This sounds a little more natural to me.
The experience is it worth it.
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Great text, just a couple of small things. Well done :) Sounds like a fun day.
Jan. 25, 2022
Thanks a lot for corrections and kind feedback.
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