Nov. 4, 2022
The business journeys
It happened again my dad goes to a journey. My father has a job with many travels he must always leave. That starts in my middle school time. Suddenly he must leave and that for six months. He always must travel for weeks and then he came back for moths. My father has always missed so many Christmases also this from the last year. Sometimes he travels in winter and came back to summer. This year happened the same thing this once he leaves us for six weeks. I hope this doesn't take that long. My father must always stay longer as planted. The half of my school years I must taking care of myself and my notes. I hope my father is fine and he comes save back.
It just so happened againthat my dad goes towent on a journey (or: trip) again.
My father has a job with many travels he must always leavethat requires him to travel frequently.
That starts in mye (business) trips start as soon as I begin a new middle school time.erm.
Suddenly, he must leave and thathas/had (depending on how recent it was) to leave and stay overseas for six months.
He must always must travel for weeks and then he came, only coming back foafter months.
My father has always missed so many Christmases also this from the celebrations, including last year's.
Sometimes he travels in winter and caomes back toin summer.
This year happened, the same thing this once he leaves ushappened. He was absent for six weeks.
I hope this doesn't take that long.at his trip doesn't last too long this time.
My father must always stay longer asthan plantned.
The half of my school years I must taking care of myself and my notesI must be responsible for myself and my studies (?) for half of the school year.
I hope my father is fine and he comes save backback safe.
The business journeys
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Suddenly, he must leave and thathad would have to leave for six months.
He always must travels for weeks and then he caomes back for months.
My father has always missed so many Christmases also this from the last year.
Sometimes he travels in the winter and caomes back toin the summer.
This year happened the same thing this once he leaveshappened. He left us for six weeks.
I hope this doesit won't take that long.
My father must always stays longer as plantned.
The hHalf of mythe school years, I amust taking care of myself and my notgrades.
I hope my father is fineokay and he comes save back.
It happened again my dad goes to a journeyMy Dad is going on another trip again.
My father has a job with many travels he must alwayslots of travel, and he always has to leave.
That starts in myIt will begin while I'm at middle school time.
Suddenly he must leave, and that for six whole months.
He always must travel for weeks, and then he caomes back for moths.
My father has alwaysready missed so many Christmases also this from the last year.
Sometimes he travels in winter and came back toin summer.
This year happened the same thing this oncehappened, he leavesft us for six weeks.
My father must always stay longer asthan plantned.
The hHalf of my school years I must takinge care of myself and my notes.
I hope my father is fine and he comes save backback safely.
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Good job! Your writing is very good. I'm sorry your Dad has to travel so much - it sounds like it must be really tough for you :(
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