Aug. 27, 2025
The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time. I believed there should be wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores. However, after playing a couple of online games, my view completely changed.
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood. It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts. Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet. Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story. Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise. Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun. I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life full of seriousness and tension is stressful. If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them. I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
オンラインゲームをすることは、昔はただの時間の無駄だと思っていた。本を読んだり家事をしたり、もっと他に有意義な時間の使い方ができるはずだと考えていたからだ。しかしいくつかのゲームをやるようになって、考えが変わった。
オンラインゲームをすると、手軽に気分を変えることができる。ネガティブなことを考え始めるくらいなら、オンラインゲームに没頭していたほうがはるかにましだ。オンランゲームはタブレットやスマホがあればいつでも気軽に始めることができる。本や映画のように、ストーリーを理解しようと努力する必要がない。基本的に無料だし、やりすぎることがなければ健康にも悪影響はない。
また、オンランゲームは、出かけたり運動をしたりするモチベーションになる。地図と連動したゲームをプレイするようになってから、歩いたり電車に乗ったりすることが楽しみになってきた。直感的に考えると、ゲームはプレイヤーを引きこもらせるものかもしれないが、私はむしろゲームによってアクティブになった。
真剣さや緊張だけの人生は苦しい。ゲームで状況を軽くしながら生きていくことができるなら、オンラインゲームを使うのは悪くないだろう。課金しない範囲で上手にゲームの利点と付き合っていくつもりだ。
The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time.
I believed there should bat there are wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores.
However, after playing a couple of online games, my view completely changed.
First, playing online games can help you switch (or lift) your mood.
It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts.
Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet.
Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story.
Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise.
Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun.
I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life full of seriousness and tension is stressful.
Truly!
If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them.
I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
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Well done! This reminds me of when Pokemon GO was at the height of its popularity. I would often see teenagers in groups walking around outside trying to catch Pokemon! It was quite nice to see.
Aug. 28, 2025
Thank you! Actually, I play Dragon Quest Walk rather than Pokémon Go because I don’t know much about Pokémon. I think these two games have the same concept. It’s such a revolutionary idea, since games are usually meant to be played at home.
The Bright SideALSO POSSIBLE: The Benefits of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time.
I believed there should bSTYLE: Avoid starting every sentence with the word "I." Here wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores. an alternative wording: It seemed reading books or doing chores would be a wiser use of time.
ALSO POSSIBLE: However, after playing a couple of online games, my view changed completely changed.
NOTE: The original is possible, I think the revision above is smoother.
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood.
It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts.
Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet.
Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story.
Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
OSome online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise.
LOGIC: It depends on the game. I recommend adding the word "some."
Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun.
I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life LSO POSSIBLE: It is stressfull of seriousness and tension is stressfulto be overly serious or tense.
If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them.
I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
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Great! I am enjoying playing online games!
Aug. 28, 2025
Thank you for the alternative sentences. They are really helpful!
I used to think that playing online games was a purely a waste of time.
using and adverb in this case purely flows more natural and can better emphasise your point
However, after playing a couple of online games, my view has completely changed.
this is just for the flow of the sentence
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood.
having your can negate the need for you, like repeating in a sense
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overall you have a good grasp on the grammer and flow of sentences, as for the corrections they are pretty minor and can be disregarded at will
Aug. 28, 2025
Thank you!
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The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
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Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise.
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