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My husband has day off today. I made a great breakfast this morning. Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk. We had breakfast together, talking a lot. I had a nice morning. I love Japanese breakfasts, too. What kind of breakfast do you like?


今日は夫の仕事が休みの日です。私は朝から立派な朝ご飯を作りました。トーストしたパン、卵焼き、ほうれん草の炒め物、チーズ、温かなミルクティー。沢山の話をしながら夫と食べました。とてもいい朝でした。私は和食の朝ご飯も好きです。あなたはどんな朝ご飯が好きですか?

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The Breakfast

My husband has the day off today.

I made a great breakfast this morning.

Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.

We had breakfast together, talk while chatting a lotway.

This is probably how I'd render what you wrote in Japanese

I had a nice morning.

I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

Comma not needed

What kind of breakfast do you like?

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Good work!
I like a full English breakfast. Bacon, sausages, eggs, hash browns, black pudding, fried bread, and more. But only once in a while.

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I love the phrase "chatting away." I'll start using it right away.
The English breakfast is really delicious, and I love it too.
Thanks for the corrections!

The Breakfast

My husband has the day off today.

I made a great breakfast this morning.

Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.

We had breakfast together, and talkinged a lot.

I had a nice morning.

I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

What kind of breakfast do you like?

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Thanks for the feedback!
I'm happy to know the correct sentence.

My husband has day off today.

My husband has his day off today.

Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.

incomplete sentence?

We had breakfast together, talking a lot.

We had breakfast together and talked a lot.

I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

I love Japanese breakfasts too.

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Thank you for the corrections! I'm so happy.

The Breakfast

It sounds more natural to title the post "Breakfast".

My husband has the day off today.

I made a great breakfast this morning.

Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.

We had breakfast together, talking a lot.

I had a nice morning.

I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

You don't need the comma in this sentence.

What kind of breakfast do you like?

Feedback

I don't think I've had a Japanese breakfast before, but I would like to try it one day. Usually I have either an American or Mexican breakfast, but I've also had a French breakfast too. There's probably other ones I've had but I can't remember currently.

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Thank you for the corrections.
Breakfasts in America, Mexico, and France all look delicious!
Japanese breakfasts are delicious too, so please try one sometime.

The Breakfast


The Breakfast

It sounds more natural to title the post "Breakfast".

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My husband has day off today.


My husband has the day off today.

My husband has day off today.

My husband has his day off today.

My husband has the day off today.

My husband has the day off today.

I made a great breakfast this morning.


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Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.


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Toast, fried eggs, fried spinach, cheese and hot English tea with milk.

incomplete sentence?

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We had breakfast together, talking a lot.


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We had breakfast together, talking a lot.

We had breakfast together and talked a lot.

We had breakfast together, and talkinged a lot.

We had breakfast together, talk while chatting a lotway.

This is probably how I'd render what you wrote in Japanese

I had a nice morning.


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I love Japanese breakfasts, too.


I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

You don't need the comma in this sentence.

I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

I love Japanese breakfasts too.

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I love Japanese breakfasts, too.

Comma not needed

What kind of breakfast do you like?


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