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kailynhuynh96

July 9, 2024

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The boredom

Some people may feel the life is bored when they’re free in economy. However, people tend to consider the boredom is just a small thing, not something special. But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness life. The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous with others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become the depression. The boredom is not an ordinary thing to be passed.


Một số người cảm thấy cuộc sống thật tẻ nhạt khi họ có được sự tự do về tài chính. Tuy nhiên, mọi người có xu hướng coi sự nhàm chán này là một điều nhỏ nhặt chứ không phải điều gì đặc biệt. Nhưng sự buồn chán cũng có thể là một yếu tố cản trở cuộc sống hạnh phúc của một cá nhân. Điều này là do những người không ghen tị với tiền bạc hoặc danh vọng của người khác có thể tham gia vào các hành vi lệch lạc xã hội vì cảm giác buồn chán, và thậm chí đôi khi phát triển thành trầm cảm do cảm giác buồn chán ngày càng gia tăng. Sự tẻ nhạt không phải là một điều tầm thường để có thể bỏ qua.

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The bBoredom

Some people may feel theat life is boreding when they’re free in economy have a lot of free time.

However, people tend to consider theat boredom is just a small thingnormal, not something special.

But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness life.

The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous withabout others’ moneywealth or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when their boredom increases, it can become the depression.

The bBoredom is not an nordinarymal thing to be passignored.

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kailynhuynh96

July 10, 2024

71

Thanks a lot, Romany^^

Some people may feel the life is boreding when they’re free in econ have financial freedomy.

Financial freedom is when you don't have to worry about money because you have enough of it (also tài chính translates to finance/financial).
Economic freedom is a broader concept which, explained simply, you can choose your job without having to worry about government interference

However, people tend to consider theis boredom ias just a small/trivial thing, not something special.

"Trivial" means not important and not worth paying attention to. I think this is a better word to use

But the sadness can also be the challenge ofobstacle to a person’s happiness. /... to a person's happy life.

The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous withof others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become thedepression / lead to depression.

"This problem is because people who aren't jealous of others' money or fame can participate in socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes even develop depression from their increasing boredom"

Theis boredom is not an ordinary thing to be pass small/trivial thing that can be overlooked.

I think "small/trivial" are better words to use

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kailynhuynh96

July 10, 2024

71

Thank you. Your advice help me a lot.

The boredom

Some people may feel the life is bored when they’re free in economybored in life when they’re economically free.

However, people tend to consider the boredom ias just a small thing, not something special.

Alternatively: '...consider the boredom to be just a small thing,...'

But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness in life.

The reason for this problem is theat people who are not jealous withof others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become the depression.

The bBoredom is not an ordinary thing to be passignored.

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kailynhuynh96

July 10, 2024

71

Thank you so much for your help, jh156.

But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness life.


But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness in life.

But the sadness can also be the challenge ofobstacle to a person’s happiness. /... to a person's happy life.

But the sadness can also be the challenge of a person’s happiness life.

The boredom


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The bBoredom

Some people may feel the life is bored when they’re free in economy.


Some people may feel the life is bored when they’re free in economybored in life when they’re economically free.

Some people may feel the life is boreding when they’re free in econ have financial freedomy.

Financial freedom is when you don't have to worry about money because you have enough of it (also tài chính translates to finance/financial). Economic freedom is a broader concept which, explained simply, you can choose your job without having to worry about government interference

Some people may feel theat life is boreding when they’re free in economy have a lot of free time.

However, people tend to consider the boredom is just a small thing, not something special.


However, people tend to consider the boredom ias just a small thing, not something special.

Alternatively: '...consider the boredom to be just a small thing,...'

However, people tend to consider theis boredom ias just a small/trivial thing, not something special.

"Trivial" means not important and not worth paying attention to. I think this is a better word to use

However, people tend to consider theat boredom is just a small thingnormal, not something special.

The boredom is not an ordinary thing to be passed.


The bBoredom is not an ordinary thing to be passignored.

Theis boredom is not an ordinary thing to be pass small/trivial thing that can be overlooked.

I think "small/trivial" are better words to use

The bBoredom is not an nordinarymal thing to be passignored.

The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous with others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become the depression.


The reason for this problem is theat people who are not jealous withof others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become the depression.

The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous withof others’ money or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when the boredom increases, it can become thedepression / lead to depression.

"This problem is because people who aren't jealous of others' money or fame can participate in socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes even develop depression from their increasing boredom"

The reason for this problem is the people who are not jealous withabout others’ moneywealth or fame can have socially deviant behaviors because of the boredom, and sometimes when their boredom increases, it can become the depression.

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