Jan. 15, 2024
The Book That I Want to Read Again
I have a book in my mind for days, maybe weeks, that I want to read again now. That is Salinger's "Franny and Zooey". That is actually because of ChatGPT which is an AI I learned about recently. I liked the homey air of 'Zooey' but had difficulty understanding many parts of it. Now that I know this intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better. And on the way, I'm sure I'll enjoy the conversation with the AI as well. I will also reread 'Franny' of course, which is a prologue-like short story, as I like the girl's comic-like quality very much.
最近ずっと、もう一度読みたいと思っている本があります。それはサリンジャーの『フラニーとゾーイ』です。これは実は ChatGPT という最近見つけた AI のせいです。私は「ゾーイ」の家庭的な雰囲気が好きでしたが、分からないところがたくさんありました。この優秀な AI の助けがあれば、もっとよく理解できるかもしれないと思うのです。それにこの AI との会話も楽しみです。もちろん「フラニー」の方も読むつもりです。こちらはプロローグのような短いお話ですが、私はこの少女漫画のような感じが好きなのです。
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I have atwo books in my mind for days, maybe weeks, that I want to read again now.
That isey are Salinger's "Franny" and "Zooey".
That is actually because of ChatGPT, which is an AI I learned about recently.
before a "which", you need to put a comma
I liked the homey airwelcoming aspect of '"Zooey'" but had difficulty understanding many parts of it.
Homey: it's not generally used (you will see the slang version of a friend "homie" more often)
Homey air sounds very strange
double quotes always
Now that I know (how to use) this intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better.
And onby the way, I'm sure I'll enjoy the conversation with the AI as well.
I will also reread '"Franny'" of course, which is a prmonologue-like short story, as I like the girl's comic-likeal quality very much.
prologue = introduction
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Interesting! Maybe next time you can delve deeper into what these books made you feel when you first read them and how you expect they will be different now that you have the assistance of ChatGPT :)
I'm not sure if "Franny and Zooey" is a single book or two books, but you need to concord it throughout, because in the beginning you mentioned them as one, but later you explained them as two.
Jan. 16, 2024
Thank you. It's one book that consists of those two chapters. I'm really looking forward to read it again! :)
The Book That I Want to Read Again
I have had a book in my mind for days, maybe weeks, that I want to read again now / that I now want to read again.
'That I want to read again now' is ok, but the correction makes it flow a little more.
ThaIt is Salinger's "Franny and Zooey".
That is actually because of ChatGPT, which is an AI I learned about recently.
I liked the homey air of 'Zooey' but had difficulty understanding many parts of it.
Now that I know this artificially intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better.
And on the way, I'm sure I'll enjoy the conversation with the AI as well.
I will also reread 'Franny' of course, which is a prologue-like short story, as I like the girl's comic-like quality very much.
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Great job.
Jan. 16, 2024
Thank you!
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I have a book in my mind for days, maybe weeks, that I want to read again now. I have had a book in my mind for days, maybe weeks, that I want to read again now / that I now want to read again. 'That I want to read again now' is ok, but the correction makes it flow a little more. I have |
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I liked the homey air of 'Zooey' but had difficulty understanding many parts of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I liked the Homey: it's not generally used (you will see the slang version of a friend "homie" more often) Homey air sounds very strange double quotes always |
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Now that I know this intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better. Now that I know this artificially intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better. Now that I know (how to use) this intelligent assistant, I might be able to understand the story better. |
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I will also reread 'Franny' of course, which is a prologue-like short story, as I like the girl's comic-like quality very much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I will also reread prologue = introduction |
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