Nov. 29, 2020
The book
The last book I read it was called "The service to the boss". It is about a assistant manager get in love with the manager, it was very interesting for me, when I started to read I couldn't stop read, I read 120 pages straight I couldn't believe because normally when I read I do not more than 20 pages , I was impressed with myself. I highly recommend it is a nice novel.
The book
The last book I read it was called, "The service to the boss".
It is about an assistant manager getthat fell in love with the manager, i. It was very interesting for me, when I started to read I couldn't stop read,ing. I read 120 pages straight. I couldn't believe because nit. Normally, when I read I do not more than 20 pages ,- I was impressed with myself.
I highly recommend it i. It's a nice novel.
The book
The last book I read it was called "The service to the boss".
It is about an assistant manager getwho falls in love with the manager, i. It was very interesting for me, when I started to reading it. I couldn't stop read,ing. I read 120 pages straight. I couldn't believe it because normally when I read I do not more than 20 pages , I was impressed with myself.
The sentence is way too long. Punctuation needs work
I highly recommend it is a nice novel.
Feedback
Not too bad. The second sentence was long and which made it harder to understand. Article "an" goes before words starting with 'u,o,i,e and a' instead of "a"
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The last book I read it was called "The service to the boss". The last book I read i The last book I read it was called, "The service to the boss". |
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It is about a assistant manager get in love with the manager, it was very interesting for me, when I started to read I couldn't stop read, I read 120 pages straight I couldn't believe because normally when I read I do not more than 20 pages , I was impressed with myself. It is about an assistant manager The sentence is way too long. Punctuation needs work It is about an assistant manager |
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I highly recommend it is a nice novel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I highly recommend it |
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