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dave08

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The Blockchain

A chain of blocks known as Blockchain is a data structure in which its information is grouped as sets (blocks) to which meta-information relative to another previous block is added. In this way, employing cryptographic techniques, the information contained in a block only can be repudiated or edited by modifying all subsequent blocks. This property allows its application in a distributed environment. In this way, Blockchain can be used as a public database in which data can't be modified.

In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions BlockChain has been implemented as a distributed digital ledger that allows support and guaranty of cryptocurrencies. Following an appropriate protocol, Blockchain allows data integrity between all of the participants in a net without depending on a centralized institution. For these reasons, Blockchain technology is especially well suited for scenarios that require storing data sorted increasingly in time, without modification possibility, and distributed reliability instead of a certifier entity.

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A chain of blocks known as Blockchain is a data structure in which its information is grouped as sets (blocks) to which meta-information relative to another previous block is added.

In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions BlockChain has been implemented as a distributed digital ledger employing cryptography and hash functions that allows support and guaranty of cryptocurrencies.

Also, this is a complicated sentence, maybe break it into smaller sentances to make it easier to read.

For these reasons, Blockchain technology is especially well suited for scenarios that require storing data sorted increasingly in time, without the possibility of modification possibility, and distributed reliability instead of a certifier entity.

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Good technical language, sounds professional. Nicely done!

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Dec. 9, 2021

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In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions BlockChain has been implemented as a distributed digital ledger employing cryptography and hash functions that allows support and guaranty of cryptocurrencies.

"In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions..." has no sense?

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Dec. 9, 2021

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For these reasons, Blockchain technology is especially well suited for scenarios that require storing data sorted increasingly in time, without the possibility of modification possibility, and distributed reliability instead of a certifier entity.

Why "the possibility of modification" instead of "modification possibility"

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dave08

Dec. 9, 2021

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Thank you very much Bethany

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Bethany

Dec. 9, 2021

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You could say “In practice Blockchain is implemented…” or “Employing cryptography and hash functions, Blockchain is implemented…” but joining them with an “and” at the start makes it make no sense. I’m not sure why. Maybe because they’re not grammatically identical (note the comma).

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Bethany

Dec. 9, 2021

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And, I don’t know. “Modification possibility” sounds weird to me for some reason.

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dave08

Dec. 10, 2021

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Thanks

The Blockchain


A chain of blocks known as Blockchain is a data structure in which its information is grouped as sets (blocks) to which meta-information relative to another previous block is added.


A chain of blocks known as Blockchain is a data structure in which its information is grouped as sets (blocks) to which meta-information relative to another previous block is added.

In this way, employing cryptographic techniques, the information contained in a block only can be repudiated or edited by modifying all subsequent blocks.


This property allows its application in a distributed environment.


In this way, Blockchain can be used as a public database in which data can't be modified.


In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions BlockChain has been implemented as a distributed digital ledger that allows support and guaranty of cryptocurrencies.


In practice and employing cryptography and hash functions BlockChain has been implemented as a distributed digital ledger employing cryptography and hash functions that allows support and guaranty of cryptocurrencies.

Also, this is a complicated sentence, maybe break it into smaller sentances to make it easier to read.

Following an appropriate protocol, Blockchain allows data integrity between all of the participants in a net without depending on a centralized institution.


For these reasons, Blockchain technology is especially well suited for scenarios that require storing data sorted increasingly in time, without modification possibility, and distributed reliability instead of a certifier entity.


For these reasons, Blockchain technology is especially well suited for scenarios that require storing data sorted increasingly in time, without the possibility of modification possibility, and distributed reliability instead of a certifier entity.

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