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Hello! Currently I'm in Belarus and life is such slower. I feel serenity. The most of my time I devote to c and funny scratch projects. A feeling of calmness is atypical for me. I suspect that life in my past country made me depressed. Bit by bit my depression is deissapearing. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
The birthplace
Hello!
CI'm currently I'm in Belarus, and life is such slower here.
* Starting with a sentence with "Currently" isn't a grammatically wrong, but I think it sounds too strong unless you want to emphasize the timing.
* The present tense "I'm" already implies "now", "currently".
I feel serenitye.
Or "I feel a sense of serenity."
The mMost of my time I devote to cC programming and funny s Scratch projects.
* I'm guessing you mean "C programming" by "c".
* I'm also guessing you mean the Scratch platform by "scratch".
* "funny" means смешной, whereas "fun" means весёлый. "fun" seems more appropriate here... unless you actually laugh while doing the projects. :)
AThe feeling of calmness is atypic is unusual for me.
"The feeling of calm" or "A sense of calm" sounds more natural to me.
I suspect that life in my pastrevious country made me depressed.
* "past" describes time, so "my past country" is incorrect.
* "my previous country" or "my former country" or "the country I used to live in" all work.
On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
* "the reason why" is redundant.
* Either "this may be the reason I feel better" or "this may be why I feel better" sounds more natural.
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I can only imagine what you're been through. I'm glad you're finding some peace there.
P.S. I missed correcting one more line, and LangCorrect doesn't let me add a new correction once I've submitted. "deissapearing" is misspelled -- it should be "disappearing".
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Currently I'm in Belarus and life is such slower.
* Starting with a sentence with "Currently" isn't a grammatically wrong, but I think it sounds too strong unless you want to emphasize the timing. * The present tense "I'm" already implies "now", "currently". |
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I feel serenity. I feel seren Or "I feel a sense of serenity." |
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The most of my time I devote to c and funny scratch projects.
* I'm guessing you mean "C programming" by "c". * I'm also guessing you mean the Scratch platform by "scratch". * "funny" means смешной, whereas "fun" means весёлый. "fun" seems more appropriate here... unless you actually laugh while doing the projects. :) |
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A feeling of calmness is atypical for me.
"The feeling of calm" or "A sense of calm" sounds more natural to me. |
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I suspect that life in my past country made me depressed. I suspect that life in my p * "past" describes time, so "my past country" is incorrect. * "my previous country" or "my former country" or "the country I used to live in" all work. |
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Bit by bit my depression is deissapearing. |
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On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason * "the reason why" is redundant. * Either "this may be the reason I feel better" or "this may be why I feel better" sounds more natural. |
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