Aug. 3, 2024
I started watching the Olympics on TV before I entered my elementary school, and now I am watching the live broadcast of the Paris Olympic Table tennis women's singles final. It feels like I'm more excited than the two girls on the field.
I played badminton, table tennis and volleyball when I was a student because of the influence of watching those sports on TV, but I was not proficient in any.
As you may know, I don't play none of them now.
But there are still some impacts remaining.
The biggest one might be a belief that I must have some ambition and I can achieve the target if I put my effort on it.
It seems a little obvious to many people, but as a girl in a big family that prefer sons to daughters, I firstly got that from the Chinese women Olympic athletes.
When I was a child, adults around me sometimes said that women hold up half the sky, but in fact they ignored girls and treated the boys as the hope of the family.
The women atheletes in Olympics made me believe that I also have power as a girl.
Thanks to the mentors I have never met!
我在上小学之前就开始在电视上看奥运会,现在我正在看巴黎奥运会乒乓球女单决赛的直播。感觉我比球场上的两个女孩更兴奋。
在我还是学生的时候,由于在电视上观看这些运动的影响,我打过羽毛球、乒乓球和排球,但我都不是很精通。
你可能知道,我现在一个都不打了。
但仍存在一些影响。
最大的一个可能是一个信念:我必须有一些野心,且我可以通过努力实现目标。
这对很多人来说似乎是显而易见的道理,但作为一个重男轻女的大家庭中的女孩,我从中国女奥运运动员那里第一次确认到这一点。
小时候,身边的大人有时会说女人能顶半边天,但实际上他们忽略女孩,把男孩当成了家庭的希望。
奥运会上的女运动员让我相信,作为一个女孩,我也有力量。
谢谢我未曾谋面的老师们!
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Thanks to the mentors I have never met!
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