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Ladia

Aug. 9, 2020

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The Big Picture

People often loose the big picture. When I say a big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe. We as a species are programmed by nature to solve tasks at hand. I noticed that I think about topics which somehow come to my mind. But a topic doesn't just come to your mind. It is somehow conveyed. Most often it comes through your eyes. When you're seeing your laptop ahead of you with an opened LangCorrect, you just keep writing the journal. When you're on a walk, see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is. If you think about it, eyes can't be your only source of thoughts. Thoughts are interconnected. If you think about one thing, it leads you to another thing and so forth. Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuff, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our sheer existence.
Ask yourself, how often your mind goes through those profound thoughts about the universe? Books from Stephen Hawking are good starters for your mind to see the big picture. Who are we in this vast universe? Just a tiny insignificant dot who can temporarily observe the universe to a very limited and subjective extent. Search "Pale Blue Dot" on the internet, it's fascinating.

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People often loose the big picture.

When I say athe big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe.

I noticed that I think about topics whichthat somehow come to my mind.

When you're on a walk, and see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is.

Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuff, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our shemere existence.

"sheer" is not quite right, to me. "mere" has a slightly different meaning, but I think works better here.

Ask yourself, how often does your mind goes through those profound thoughts about the universe?

The Big Picture

People often loose sight of the big picture.

When I say athe big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe.

We as a species are programmed by nature to solve the tasks at hand.

I noticed that I think about topics whichthat somehow come to my mind.

But a topic doesn't just come to your mind.

It is somehow conveyed.

Most often it comes through your eyes.

When you're seeing your laptop ahead of you with an opened LangCorrect, you just keep writing the journal.

When you're on a walk, and see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is.

If you think about it, eyes can't be your only source of thoughts.

Thoughts are interconnected.

If you think about one thing, it leads you to another thing and so on and forth.

The correct phase commonly used is “so on and so forth”

Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuffthings, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our shemere existence.

Ask yourself, how often your mind goes through thoese profound thoughts about the universe?

Books fromby Stephen Hawking are good starters for your mind to see the big picture.

Who are we in this vast universe?

Just a tiny insignificant dot who can temporarily observe the universe to a very limited and subjective extent.

Search "Pale Blue Dot" on the internet, it's fascinating.

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Very well done. Keep it up

Ladia's avatar
Ladia

Aug. 13, 2020

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Thank you very much!
Are use sure the phrase "and so forth" is incorrect? It just feels I've seen it so many times. I can even find it in dictionaries.

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sade291

Aug. 13, 2020

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It may be a phrase that varies depending on location. I’m in the Scotland and we say here “so on and so forth”

I’ve just looked it up it can be said as either “so on so forth”, “and so forth” and “And so on”. Many variations to choose from haha

The Big Picture


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People often loose the big picture.


People often loose sight of the big picture.

People often loose the big picture.

When I say a big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe.


When I say athe big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe.

When I say athe big picture, I mean our existence in the vast universe.

We as a species are programmed by nature to solve tasks at hand.


We as a species are programmed by nature to solve the tasks at hand.

I noticed that I think about topics which somehow come to my mind.


I noticed that I think about topics whichthat somehow come to my mind.

I noticed that I think about topics whichthat somehow come to my mind.

But a topic doesn't just come to your mind.


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It is somehow conveyed.


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Most often it comes through your eyes.


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When you're seeing your laptop ahead of you with an opened LangCorrect, you just keep writing the journal.


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When you're on a walk, see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is.


When you're on a walk, and see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is.

When you're on a walk, and see a snake ahead of you, you might wonder, what species it is.

If you think about it, eyes can't be your only source of thoughts.


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Thoughts are interconnected.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you think about one thing, it leads you to another thing and so forth.


If you think about one thing, it leads you to another thing and so on and forth.

The correct phase commonly used is “so on and so forth”

Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuff, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our sheer existence.


Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuffthings, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our shemere existence.

Eventually, you end up thinking about plenty of stuff, usually quite detailed and irrelevant in comparison to our shemere existence.

"sheer" is not quite right, to me. "mere" has a slightly different meaning, but I think works better here.

Ask yourself, how often your mind goes through those profound thoughts about the universe?


Ask yourself, how often your mind goes through thoese profound thoughts about the universe?

Ask yourself, how often does your mind goes through those profound thoughts about the universe?

Books from Stephen Hawking are good starters for your mind to see the big picture.


Books fromby Stephen Hawking are good starters for your mind to see the big picture.

Who are we in this vast universe?


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Just a tiny insignificant dot who can temporarily observe the universe to a very limited and subjective extent.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Search "Pale Blue Dot" on the internet, it's fascinating.


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