Dec. 2, 2020
The big changing
I had been living a simple and planned life everytime, had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, little problems, but in one moment everything had changed I need to moved at other country.
I was thinkin, planning and taking the control When Covid came.
The big changing didin't be to move a other country, It was to understand that I don't have the total control of my life.
Now I study english everyday,make exercise on my livingroom, work from home and I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for my fly.
The big changinge
I had been living a simple and planned life everytime,. I had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, littlejob, and few problems, but in one moment everything chad changenged and I needed to moved at to another country.
I was thinking, planning and taking the control Wwhen Covid came.
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I think this is what you're trying to say here.
"control over" is the phrase
Now I study eEnglish every day,make exercise oin my living room, and work from home and. I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for myuntil I can fly.
English is a proper noun so the first letter is capitalized.
Everyday vs every day: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/everyday-every-day/
I'm not sure what you wanted to say with "wait for my fly" but if you explain it a little more I can try to help think of another way to say it.
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Nice job! Thought provoking idea about what the big change really was. Keep writing :)
Dec. 2, 2020
Thank you!
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I had been living a simple and planned life everytime, had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, little problems, but in one moment everything had changed I need to moved at other country. I had been living |
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I was thinkin, planning and taking the control When Covid came. I was thinking, planning and taking |
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The big changing didin't be to move a other country, It was to understand that I don't have the total control of my life. The big chang I think this is what you're trying to say here. "control over" is the phrase |
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Now I study english everyday,make exercise on my livingroom, work from home and I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for my fly. Now I study English is a proper noun so the first letter is capitalized. Everyday vs every day: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/everyday-every-day/ I'm not sure what you wanted to say with "wait for my fly" but if you explain it a little more I can try to help think of another way to say it. |
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