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Nov. 19, 2024

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The best way too travel in a city is on foot

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad their country. If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.
It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitness, but it you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.
In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's more different experience than you usually do.
In conclusion, I want to say that, travel around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

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The best way too travel in a city is on foot

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad in their country.

If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnessexercise, but it you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.

do fitness is correct but exercise is more natural in this context

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's morea different experience than you would usually dohave.

In conclusion, I want to say that, traveling around the city by your owon foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroadoutside their country.

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitness, but it you will do ado small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's more different experience than you usually do. (or, it's a more interesting experience than using one.)

In conclusion, I want to say that, travel around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

Travelling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad from their country.

If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnesare not fit / do not do sports, but itf you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers byeach week, it will be easier.

fitness is a noun so you cannot 'do' it

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's morea different experience than if you usually do.

you do not need to use 'will' because it's kind of not future tense sorry I am not a learned English speaker

In conclusion, I want to say that, travelling around the city by your owon foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

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this is really good and honestly very interesting. I am inspired to walk around my own city now, thank you

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Nurdaulet

Nov. 19, 2024

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I appreciate it!)

The best way too travel in a city is on foot

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad their country.

If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnessare unfit, but itf you will do atake small steps and add a couple of kilometers byper week, it will be easier.


here, per is something similar to "every"

In conclusion, I want to say that,feel like travelling around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will get to learn more about your city too.

I want to say that is grammatically correct, but in English when we want to emphasise the fact that what we are about to say is a personal opinion, we use "I feel that" or "I think that"

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Nurdaulet

Nov. 19, 2024

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Thank you very much!

The best way too travel in a city is on foot


The best way too travel in a city is on foot

The best way too travel in a city is on foot

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad their country.


Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad their country.

Travelling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad from their country.

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroadoutside their country.

Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad in their country.

If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.


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It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitness, but it you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.


It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnessare unfit, but itf you will do atake small steps and add a couple of kilometers byper week, it will be easier.

here, per is something similar to "every"

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnesare not fit / do not do sports, but itf you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers byeach week, it will be easier.

fitness is a noun so you cannot 'do' it

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitness, but it you will do ado small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.

It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitnessexercise, but it you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.

do fitness is correct but exercise is more natural in this context

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's more different experience than you usually do.


In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's morea different experience than if you usually do.

you do not need to use 'will' because it's kind of not future tense sorry I am not a learned English speaker

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's more different experience than you usually do. (or, it's a more interesting experience than using one.)

In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's morea different experience than you would usually dohave.

In conclusion, I want to say that, travel around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.


In conclusion, I want to say that,feel like travelling around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will get to learn more about your city too.

I want to say that is grammatically correct, but in English when we want to emphasise the fact that what we are about to say is a personal opinion, we use "I feel that" or "I think that"

In conclusion, I want to say that, travelling around the city by your owon foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In conclusion, I want to say that, traveling around the city by your owon foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.

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