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The Best Places to Stay Cool in China

During summer, most places in China are very hot. The highest temperature can be around forty degrees Celsius.

Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spend the summer.

China is so large, and it is several thousand kilometers from its southernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China and borders Mongolia. Hulunbuir League is a vast expanse of grassland in Inner Mongolia and borders Russia. It is really cool there in summer.

Most cities in the northern part of Heilongjiang province are also cool, such as Heihe and Yichun. Since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in summer. They are Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province. These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causes the cool weather.

The third type of places where it is cool are in mountainous areas. For instance, the Lushan Mountains and the Moganshan Mountains are regarded as the best places to spend summer in the central part of China.

One place that I want to mention is the Shandong Peninsula, which is in the eastern part of China and borders the Bohai Sea and the Yellow Sea. It is also very cool there in summer.

Well, the above-mentioned places are the best ones where people can escape from the heat waves in China.

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The Best Places to Stay Cool in China

During the summer, most places in China are verextremely hot.

The highest temperature can be around forty degrees Celsius.

Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spendto spend time in places/areas with cooler temperatures during the summer.

You can also say, "Thus, lots of people choose to stay in places with cooler temperatures during the summer."

China is so large, and it is several thousand kilometers from its southernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China and borders Mongolia.

Hulunbuir League is a vast expanse of grassland in Inner Mongolia and borders Russia.

It is really cool there in summer.

Most cities in the northern part of Heilongjiang province are also cool, such as Heihe and Yichun, since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in the summer.

They are (the) Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province.

These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causmakes the cool weather cool.

The third type of places where it is cool are in mountainous areas.

For instance, the Lushan Mountains and the Moganshan Mountains are regarded as the best places to spend summer in the central part of China.

One place that I want to mention is the Shandong Peninsula, which is in the eastern part of China and borders the Bohai Sea and the Yellow Sea.

It is also very cool there in summer.

Well, the above-mentioned places are the best ones where people can escape from the heat waves in China.

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Jack

July 11, 2024

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Thank you very much.

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July 11, 2024

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You're welcome.

The Best Places to Stay Cool in China

During the summer, most places in China are very hot.

The highest temperature can bereach around forty degrees Celsius.

"be" is also correct but "reach" is more commonly used when describing extreme temperatures

Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spend the summer.

China is so large, and i that its southernmost point is several thousand kilometers away from its sounorthernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China and borders Mongolia.

Hulunbuir League is a vast expanse of grassland in Inner Mongolia and borders Russia.

It is really cool there in the summer.

Most cities in the northern part of Heilongjiang province are also cool, such as Heihe and Yichun.

Since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in summer.

They are Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province.

These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causis what creates the cool weather.

The third type of places where it is cool areis in mountainous areas.

"the third type" is one specific type, so singular

For instance, the Lushan Mountains and the Moganshan Mountains are regarded as the best places to spend the summer in the central part of China.

One place that I want to mention is the Shandong Peninsula, which is in the eastern part of China and borders the Bohai Sea and the Yellow Sea.

It is also very cool there in the summer.

Well, the above-mentioned places are the best ones where people can escape from the heat waves in China.

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Jack

July 11, 2024

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Thank you very much.
By the way, could you please tell me why you modify summer to the summer. I have no idea about the reason for this correction.

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shorter

July 12, 2024

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Hey! Sorry, honestly, I don't know either. I'm pretty sure summer is okay too, but the people in my region and I usually put "the" in front of it, so it sounds a bit more natural to me.

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Jack

July 13, 2024

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Okay, thank you for your responses.

The Best Places to Stay Cool in China

During summer, most places in China are very hot.

The highest temperature can be around forty degrees Celsius.

Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spend the summer.

China is sovery large, and it is several thousand kilometers from its southernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China andthat borders Mongolia.

using "and" is correct, using "that" makes it sound slightly more sophisticated

SincThis is because they are in an area with high latitudes.

This is not a full sentence. With "since," it should either go in the middle of a sentence (e.g., they are cool since they are at high latitude), or can be the beginning of a sentence with a second clause (since they are at a high latitude, they are cool in the summer). Hope that helps!

Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in summer.

They are Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province.

These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causes the cool weather.

For instance, the Lushan Mountains and the Moganshan Mountains are regarded as the best places to spend summer in the central part of China.

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Jack

July 11, 2024

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Thank you very much. Welcome to China.

The Best Places to Stay Cool in China


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Most cities in the northern part of Heilongjiang province are also cool, such as Heihe and Yichun.


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Most cities in the northern part of Heilongjiang province are also cool, such as Heihe and Yichun, since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Since they are in an area with high latitudes.


SincThis is because they are in an area with high latitudes.

This is not a full sentence. With "since," it should either go in the middle of a sentence (e.g., they are cool since they are at high latitude), or can be the beginning of a sentence with a second clause (since they are at a high latitude, they are cool in the summer). Hope that helps!

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Since they are in an area with high latitudes.

Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in summer.


Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in summer.

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Besides the places in the northern parts of China, there are places in southwest China where it is also cool in the summer.

They are Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province.


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They are (the) Yunnan Province and Guizhou Province.

These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causes the cool weather.


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These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causis what creates the cool weather.

These two provinces are situated on highlands and have an altitude of around two thousand meters, which causmakes the cool weather cool.

The third type of places where it is cool are in mountainous areas.


The third type of places where it is cool areis in mountainous areas.

"the third type" is one specific type, so singular

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For instance, the Lushan Mountains and the Moganshan Mountains are regarded as the best places to spend summer in the central part of China.


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The highest temperature can be around forty degrees Celsius.


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"be" is also correct but "reach" is more commonly used when describing extreme temperatures

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Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spend the summer.


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Therefore, many people seek places where it is cool to spendto spend time in places/areas with cooler temperatures during the summer.

You can also say, "Thus, lots of people choose to stay in places with cooler temperatures during the summer."

China is so large, and it is several thousand kilometers from its southernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.


China is sovery large, and it is several thousand kilometers from its southernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

China is so large, and i that its southernmost point is several thousand kilometers away from its sounorthernmost point to the northernmost, so it is easy to find such places.

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Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China and borders Mongolia.


Inner Mongolia is an autonomous region in the northern part of China andthat borders Mongolia.

using "and" is correct, using "that" makes it sound slightly more sophisticated

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Hulunbuir League is a vast expanse of grassland in Inner Mongolia and borders Russia.


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It is also very cool there in summer.


It is also very cool there in the summer.

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One place that I want to mention is the Shandong Peninsula, which is in the eastern part of China and borders the Bohai Sea and the Yellow Sea.


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Well, the above-mentioned places are the best ones where people can escape from the heat waves in China.


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