July 14, 2025
The best moment in your intier life
The best moment that i realy hope to live it again in my life it was thr birthday of my littel brother it was the hippiest day in my life ,because he came after 10 years,and also i love cheldren so much i'm realy fand of babies ,so when he was born it was a merical for me and i have been watching him for a long hours just reflecting his tiny face while he was sleeping .i realy admire this littel baby and i felt very warm and pleased feelings.
The best moment in your ientiere life
The best moment that iI realy hope to live it again in my life, it was thre birthday of my littele brother i.¶
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It was the hiappiest day inof my life , because he came after 10 years, and also iI love cheildren so much i. I'm realy faond of babies ,so when he was born it was a merical iracle for me and iI have been watching him for a long hours, just reflectadmiring his tiny face while he was sleeping .i. I really admired this littele baby and iI felt very warm and pleasedserene feelings.
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The best moment that I really hope to live again in my life was the birthday of my little brother. It was the happiest day in my life, because he came after 10 years and I also love children very much. I'm a fan of babies, so when he was born it was a miracle for me and I would watch him for long hours. Just watching his face while he was sleeping. I really admire this little baby and I feel very warm and pleasing feelings.
- You would normally put the pronoun "I" in caps not "i". Also you mispelled the adjective little as the "l" goes before the "e" not after. Furthermore, I don't know if you mispelled "happiest" or if it was rather a mistake while typing unconciously, same thing happened with "children". In the "I'm really fan of babies, "really shouldn't be used there, it comes out kind of weird, also it is "fan" not "fand". I'm guessing you wanted to say it was a miracle rather than "merical". Plus, The construction of "I have been watching him for long hours" has to be constructed using "would" instead of the present continous. I think you ment watching instead of reflecting but I don't really know. And lastly, the last sentence: "I felt very warm and pleased feelings" I would change the verb into the present form and you use pleased when you want to say you felt that way without the need to put feelings after it, if you do put feelings after you should put it in the -ing form instead of -ed.
Overall, it was nice. Just some spelling problems and some wrong choices of the verbs forms, but it was understandable and I believe you have a rather good vocab background.
July 14, 2025
Thank you so much I'will take down all your important comments
Thank you again.
The bBest mMoment in yYour intier l/My Entire Life
Title capitalization rules.
This would be a little more appropriate as "MY" entire life, since you are speaking about yourself in this text.
The best moment that iI really hope to live itexperience again in my life it was thre birthday of my littele brother i. It was the hiappiest day in my life , because he came after 10 years,and also i of waiting, and also because I love cheildren so much i. I'm really faond of babies , so when he was born it was a merical iracle for me and i. I have been watching him for a longmany hours, just reflectinglooking at his tiny face while he was sleeping .is. I really admirlove this littele baby and i felt; it brings very warm and pleasedant feelings.
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Great job. It's really sweet how much you love your brother!
July 14, 2025
Thank you so much
I did so many mistaks I'will take care of all your important corrections
Thank you again.
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The best moment that i realy hope to live it again in my life it was thr birthday of my littel brother it was the hippiest day in my life ,because he came after 10 years,and also i love cheldren so much i'm realy fand of babies ,so when he was born it was a merical for me and i have been watching him for a long hours just reflecting his tiny face while he was sleeping .i realy admire this littel baby and i felt very warm and pleased feelings. The best moment that The best moment that |
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