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Dasir

Dec. 11, 2023

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The best job in the world.

What is the best job in the world? What do you think? You can say that it's a astronaut, president or street cleaner. My opinion is that the perfect job is individual choise for each man. Why do I think that? Besause, performance about choosing a job is being formed in our childhood. Many factors influence our vision of the world. For example, place, people around us, our parents or relatives, friends etc. I think every person needs a role model, who can inspire us. Some person wanted to be a doctor, some person wanted to be an engineer. I think every job is needed on our planet.

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You can say that it's a astronaut, president or street cleaner.

One might say being an astronaut, president, or street cleaner.

My opinion isI maintain that the perfect job isboils down to each individual's choise for each mance.

Why do I think that?

Besause, performance about choosing a job iThat is due to our job preferences being formed in our childhood.

Many factors influence our visionperspective of the world.

ForSome example, place,s being the place where we grew up, the people around us, our parents orand relatives, friends etc.

I think every personbody needs a role model, who can inspire us. Someone we can look up to.

I would put it like this.

Some personople wanted to be a doctors, some personople wanted to be an engineers.

I would put it present tense, because people still want to do those jobs.

I think every job is neededEverybody can fit a niche on our planet.

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Good job. I did mostly stylistic changes.

What is the best job in the world?

What do you think?

You canould say that it's an astronaut, president or street cleaner.

My opinion is that the perfect job is an individual choisce for each maperson.

Why do I think that?

Besause, performance about choosing a job is beingI think that the influences that affect our job choice are formed in our childhood.

Many factors influence our vision of the world.

For example, placeSome of those factors include our location, people around us, our parents or relatives, friends etcand so on.

I think every person needs a role model, who can inspire usthem.

Some personople wanted to be a doctors, some pwhile otherson wanted to be an engineers.

I think every job is needed on our plimportanet.

The best job in the world.


What is the best job in the world?


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What do you think?


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You can say that it's a astronaut, president or street cleaner.


You canould say that it's an astronaut, president or street cleaner.

You can say that it's a astronaut, president or street cleaner.

One might say being an astronaut, president, or street cleaner.

My opinion is that the perfect job is individual choise for each man.


My opinion is that the perfect job is an individual choisce for each maperson.

My opinion isI maintain that the perfect job isboils down to each individual's choise for each mance.

Why do I think that?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Besause, performance about choosing a job is being formed in our childhood.


Besause, performance about choosing a job is beingI think that the influences that affect our job choice are formed in our childhood.

Besause, performance about choosing a job iThat is due to our job preferences being formed in our childhood.

Many factors influence our vision of the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Many factors influence our visionperspective of the world.

For example, place, people around us, our parents or relatives, friends etc.


For example, placeSome of those factors include our location, people around us, our parents or relatives, friends etcand so on.

ForSome example, place,s being the place where we grew up, the people around us, our parents orand relatives, friends etc.

I think every person needs a role model, who can inspire us.


I think every person needs a role model, who can inspire usthem.

I think every personbody needs a role model, who can inspire us. Someone we can look up to.

I would put it like this.

Some person wanted to be a doctor, some person wanted to be an engineer.


Some personople wanted to be a doctors, some pwhile otherson wanted to be an engineers.

Some personople wanted to be a doctors, some personople wanted to be an engineers.

I would put it present tense, because people still want to do those jobs.

I think every job is needed on our planet.


I think every job is needed on our plimportanet.

I think every job is neededEverybody can fit a niche on our planet.

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