docalejol's avatar
docalejol

March 11, 2025

2
The Best gift that i received was a my education

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.
In my life I've received a lot of good gifts, a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar
All of those are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.
All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value

Corrections

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.

Or you can say “think carefully”

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable valueare invaluable.

The Best gGift tThat i rI Received wWas a mMy eEducation

Since that is your title, it should follow the capitalization rules.

The article "a" is unnecessary before "my education." "My education" is a noun phrase that doesn’t need an article

In my life, I've received a lot of goodmany great gifts, a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar
All of those are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.

"I've received a lot of good gifts" is more naturally written.
I added em dashes (—) to set off the list of items, which makes the sentence flow better and feel less choppy.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value

The comma before "have" is unnecessary since the list isn't too long or complex.

Feedback

Great work! I agree with you, our physical possessions can disappear, but our knowledge will forever stay.

The Bbest gift that i have received was ais my education

either 'an' or 'my'

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.

In my life I've received a lot of goodamazing gifts,; a computer, a bed, and an acoustic guitar .
All of th
oese are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.

good is definitely not wrong, but a word like 'amazing' makes writing seem more sophisticated.
';' is used to start a list

All the books, the notebooks, mythe paid schooltuition, and the opportunity to study inat college without working, have an inestimable value.

Feedback

Amazing job, only a few minor errors

The Best gGift tThat i rI Received wWas a mMy eEducation

Use 'an' or 'my' not both. Important words in title have a capital letter.

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.

In my life I've received a lot of good gifts,: a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar .
All of those are great, but
my education lasts a lifetime.

Use a colon to introduce a list of items after a complete sentence.
Don't use 'my' here use 'an' or do not use anything.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value

Don't need the comma before have.

Feedback

Good work.

The Best gift that iI received was a my eEducation

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.

In my life I've received a lot of good gifts,: a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar .
All of those are great, but my education
will lasts a lifetime.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid schooltuition fees, and the opportunity to study inat college without having to working, have an inestimable value.

Feedback

Indeed, Education is really the greatest gift. Your text was very well written - only a few minor mistakes.

The Best gift that i received was a my education


The Best gift that iI received was a my eEducation

The Best gGift tThat i rI Received wWas a mMy eEducation

Use 'an' or 'my' not both. Important words in title have a capital letter.

The Bbest gift that i have received was ais my education

either 'an' or 'my'

The Best gGift tThat i rI Received wWas a mMy eEducation

Since that is your title, it should follow the capitalization rules. The article "a" is unnecessary before "my education." "My education" is a noun phrase that doesn’t need an article

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I needed to think deeply before answering this question.

Or you can say “think carefully”

In my life I've received a lot of good gifts, a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar All of those are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.


In my life I've received a lot of good gifts,: a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar .
All of those are great, but my education
will lasts a lifetime.

In my life I've received a lot of good gifts,: a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar .
All of those are great, but
my education lasts a lifetime.

Use a colon to introduce a list of items after a complete sentence. Don't use 'my' here use 'an' or do not use anything.

In my life I've received a lot of goodamazing gifts,; a computer, a bed, and an acoustic guitar .
All of th
oese are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.

good is definitely not wrong, but a word like 'amazing' makes writing seem more sophisticated. ';' is used to start a list

In my life, I've received a lot of goodmany great gifts, a computer, a bed, an acoustic guitar
All of those are great, but my education lasts a lifetime.

"I've received a lot of good gifts" is more naturally written. I added em dashes (—) to set off the list of items, which makes the sentence flow better and feel less choppy.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value


All the books, the notebooks, my paid schooltuition fees, and the opportunity to study inat college without having to working, have an inestimable value.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value

Don't need the comma before have.

All the books, the notebooks, mythe paid schooltuition, and the opportunity to study inat college without working, have an inestimable value.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable value

The comma before "have" is unnecessary since the list isn't too long or complex.

All the books, the notebooks, my paid school, and the opportunity to study in college without working, have an inestimable valueare invaluable.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium