June 16, 2022
The Best Candy in the world (try to) Change My Mind
The "Paçoca" is a very popular candy in Brazil (where I live). It's made from ground peanuts, sugar and a pinch of salt. It tastes deliciously sweet. Besides what Wikipedia says, you can find it easily in every part of Brazil.
It was invented by the Native Brazilian people, but when Brazil was colonized by Portugal and other countries the recipe changed. It was originally made with a mortar, nowadays it's made using a food processors or blender.
Paçoca's ingredients:
1. ½ kg of roasted ground peanuts (unsalted)
2. 2 cups of sugar
3. 1 tablespoon of salt
4. 1/2 cup of yellow corn flour
Paçoca's receipe:
1. Combine all the ingredients into a mixer. Pulse untill it feels like a thin sand
2. Place it into a square baking pan
3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles
4. Enjoy
There's also a lot of other recipes that use paçoca, for example, paçoca cream, paçoca mousse, "pavê de paçoca" (pavê is desert that also dosen't really exist outside of Brazil, it's (kinda) similar to trifle). It's delicious taste and the myriad of deserts made with the paçoca makes me think it's the best candy in the world.
What it you favorite candy? Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out side of your country? Please, tell me in the comments.
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"Paçoca" is a very popular candy in Brazil (where I live). It's made from ground peanuts, sugar and a pinch of salt. It tastes deliciously sweet. Besides what Wikipedia says, you can find it easily in every part of Brazil.
It was invented by the native Brazilian people, but the recipe changed when Brazil was colonized by Portugal and other countries. It was originally made using a mortar and pestle. Nowadays, it's made using a food processor or blender.
Paçoca's ingredients:
1. ½ kg of roasted ground peanuts (unsalted)
2. 2 cups of sugar
3. 1 tablespoon of salt
4. 1/2 cup of yellow corn flour
Paçoca's recipe:
1. Combine all the ingredients into a mixer. Pulse untill it feels like a thin sand.
2. Place it into a square baking pan.
3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles.
4. Enjoy.
There's a lot of other recipes that use paçoca. For example, paçoca cream, paçoca mousse, and "pavê de paçoca" (Pavê is a desert that doesn't really exist outside of Brazil. It's (kinda) similar to Trifle). It's delicious taste and the myriad of deserts made with paçoca make me think it's the best candy in the world.
What is your favorite candy? Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out side of your country? Please, tell me in the comments.
The Best Candy in the wWorld (try to) Change My Mind)
The original is correct. This is how I would expect to see this sort of title written by a native speaker.
The "Paçoca" is a very popular candy in Brazil (where I live).
It tastes deliciously sweet.
Besides what Wikipedia says, you can find it easily in every part of Brazil.
It was invented by the Nnative Brazilian people, but the recipe changed when Brazil was colonized by Portugal and other countries the recipe changed.
Putting "the recipe changed" to earlier in the sentence makes it flow a little more smoothly.
It was originally made withusing a mortar, n and pestle. Nowadays, it's made using a food processors or blender.
Just "mortar" is technically fine, but the full phrase "mortar and pestle" is clearer and used more often.
Paçoca's ingredients:
1. ½ kg of roasted ground peanuts (unsalted)
2. 2 cups of sugar
3. 1 tablespoon of salt
4. 1/2 cup of yellow corn flour
Paçoca's receipe:
1. Combine all the ingredients into a mixer.
Pulse untill it feels like a thin sand.
Or better, "pulse until it has the consistency of fine sand."
2. Place it into a square baking pan.
3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles.
4. Enjoy.
There's also a lot of other recipes that use paçoca, f. For example, paçoca cream, paçoca mousse, and "pavê de paçoca". (pPavê is a desert that also dosedoesn't really exist outside of Brazil, i. It's (kinda) similar to trifle).
I'm not sure what a (food) trifle is. It may be a word I don't know in English. Do you mean truffles?
It's delicious taste and the myriad of deserts made with the paçoca makes me think it's the best candy in the world.
What its your favorite candy?
Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out side of your country?
Please, tell me in the comments.
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The Best Candy in the world (try to) Change My Mind The Best Candy in the The original is correct. This is how I would expect to see this sort of title written by a native speaker. |
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The "Paçoca" is a very popular candy in Brazil (where I live).
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It's made from ground peanuts, sugar and a pinch of salt. |
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It tastes deliciously sweet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides what Wikipedia says, you can find it easily in every part of Brazil. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was invented by the Native Brazilian people, but when Brazil was colonized by Portugal and other countries the recipe changed. It was invented by the Putting "the recipe changed" to earlier in the sentence makes it flow a little more smoothly. |
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It was originally made with a mortar, nowadays it's made using processors or mixer. |
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Paçoca's ingredients: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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1. ½ kg of roasted ground peanuts (unsalted) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. 2 cups of sugar This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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1. Combine all the ingredients into a mixer. 1. Combine all the ingredients in |
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Pulse untill it feels like a thin sand Pulse until Or better, "pulse until it has the consistency of fine sand." |
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2. Place it into a square baking pan 2. Place it into a square baking pan. |
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3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles 3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles. |
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4. Enjoy 4. Enjoy. |
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There's also a lot of other recipes that use paçoca, for example, paçoca cream, paçoca mousse, "pavê de paçoca" (pavê is desert that also dosen't really exist outside of Brazil, it's (kinda) similar to trifle). There's I'm not sure what a (food) trifle is. It may be a word I don't know in English. Do you mean truffles? |
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It's delicious taste and the myriad of deserts made with the paçoca makes me think it's the best candy in the world. It |
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What it you favorite candy? What i |
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Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out side of your country? Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out |
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Please, tell me in the comments. Please |
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It was originally made with a mortar, nowadays it's made using a food processors or blender. It was originally made Just "mortar" is technically fine, but the full phrase "mortar and pestle" is clearer and used more often. |
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3. 1 tablespoon of salt This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"Paçoca" is a very popular candy in Brazil (where I live). |
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It's made from ground peanuts, sugar and a pinch of salt. |
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It tastes deliciously sweet. |
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Besides what Wikipedia says, you can find it easily in every part of Brazil. |
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It was invented by the native Brazilian people, but the recipe changed when Brazil was colonized by Portugal and other countries. |
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It was originally made using a mortar and pestle. |
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Nowadays, it's made using a food processor or blender. |
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Paçoca's ingredients: |
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1. ½ kg of roasted ground peanuts (unsalted) |
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2. 2 cups of sugar |
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3. 1 tablespoon of salt |
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4. 1/2 cup of yellow corn flour |
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Paçoca's recipe: |
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1. Combine all the ingredients into a mixer. |
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Pulse untill it feels like a thin sand. |
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2. Place it into a square baking pan. |
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3. Use a knife to cut it into squares or a rounded cookie cutter to cut it into circles. |
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4. Enjoy. |
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There's a lot of other recipes that use paçoca. |
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For example, paçoca cream, paçoca mousse, and "pavê de paçoca" (Pavê is a desert that doesn't really exist outside of Brazil. It's (kinda) similar to Trifle). |
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It's delicious taste and the myriad of deserts made with paçoca make me think it's the best candy in the world. |
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What is your favorite candy? |
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Is there a candy or desert that doesn't exist out side of your country? |
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Please, tell me in the comments. |
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