Dec. 17, 2021
The benefit of writing
First, when I go to the store, I forget the groceries my mum told me to buy, so I make a list.
Second, I can write letters to St, Nicolas and Santa Claus, what gifts to bring me.
Next, I have relatives in Australia, so we´re sending postcards.
Finally, to make learning easier, we write down what is important and what we need to learn.
Firstly, when I go to the store, I forget the groceries my mum toldells me to buy, so I make a list.
1. "First of all, ..." could also be used.
2. You would use present tense for "tell(s)", instead of past tense "told", since you're describing a series of actions in a common habitual situation. (Note: not always though, by some speakers this might be seen as normal.)
Secondly, I can write letters to St,. Nicholas and Santa Claus, on what gifts to bring me.
1. Not sure if this is a mistake or intentional, but you should note, "St. Nicholas" is usually considered the same person as "Santa Claus".
2. Here "on" means "about/relating to"
Next, I have relatives in Australia, so we´re sending postcards.
Finally, to make learning easier, we write down what is important and what we need to learn.
Feedback
Well-written, with only a slight mistake or two. Keep it up!
Dec. 18, 2021
Sidenote (which I forgot lol): For the title, "Benefits of Writing" might sound more general, which fits here more.
Dec. 18, 2021
Thanks
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First, when I go to the store, I forget the groceries my mum told me to buy, so I make a list. Firstly, when I go to the store, I forget the groceries my mum t 1. "First of all, ..." could also be used. 2. You would use present tense for "tell(s)", instead of past tense "told", since you're describing a series of actions in a common habitual situation. (Note: not always though, by some speakers this might be seen as normal.) |
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Second, I can write letters to St, Nicolas and Santa Claus, what gifts to bring me. Secondly, I can write letters to St 1. Not sure if this is a mistake or intentional, but you should note, "St. Nicholas" is usually considered the same person as "Santa Claus". 2. Here "on" means "about/relating to" |
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Next, I have relatives in Australia, so we´re sending postcards. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, to make learning easier, we write down what is important and what we need to learn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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