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kazu

May 19, 2020

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the begining of a diary habit

Starting today, I'll write a diary everyey to improve my English skills, espcially output skills , for example writing and speaking.
I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills. And I thnk that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself. OK, let's get started. today, I couldn't get up on my scheduled time.
I always oversleep when not at work. And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training. I've only just started any of them , but I'm gonna continue. as far as studying English, I feel depressed because I don't feel that my skills are improving. However, I believe that continuation is power and I will continue to work hard everyday.


今日から毎日英語の技術、特にアウトプットの話す能力や書く能力を向上させるために日記を書き始める。

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tThe beginning of a diary habit

Starting today, I'll write a diary everye day to improve my English skills, especially output skills , in for example writing and speaking.

I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills.

And I think that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself.

tToday, I couldn't get up on my scheduled time.

And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training outside, and I've been doing some workout.

"ran" alone is a bit too brief I think. "ran outside" would be more precise.

I've only just started any of them , these activities, but I'm gonna continue.

aAs far as studying English is concerned, I feel depressed because I don't feel thatlike my skills are improving.

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Writing a daily diary is a great idea! This is a very nice first diary. Don't worry about your progress, I also believe consistency is key, and with time you will definitely make progress.
I think you might also get better if you have daily, active conversations, like on Discord for example, in text chats.

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b4nny

May 19, 2020

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I agree for sure.

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kazu

May 19, 2020

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Thank you so much!
I'm gonna keep writing.

tThe beginning of a diary habit

Starting today, I'll write a diary everyeday to improve my English skills, especially output skills ,-- for example writing and speaking.

I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills.

And I think that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself.

OK, let's get started.

tToday, I couldn't get up onat my scheduled time.

I always oversleep when not at work.

And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training.

I've only just started any of them , but I'm gonna continue.

aAs far as studying English, I feel depressed because I don't feel that my skills are improving.

However, I believe that continuationpersistence is power and I will continue to work hard everyday.

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Great job. Just little typos mostly

the begining of a diary habit


tThe beginning of a diary habit

tThe beginning of a diary habit

Starting today, I'll write a diary everyey to improve my English skills, espcially output skills , for example writing and speaking.


Starting today, I'll write a diary everyeday to improve my English skills, especially output skills ,-- for example writing and speaking.

Starting today, I'll write a diary everye day to improve my English skills, especially output skills , in for example writing and speaking.

I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills.


I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills.

I believes that writing a diary helps me to develop my vocabulary and experession skills.

And I thnk that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself.


And I think that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself.

And I think that writing a diary at the end of the day is a great way to be honest with myself.

OK, let's get started.


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today, I couldn't get up on my scheduled time.


tToday, I couldn't get up onat my scheduled time.

tToday, I couldn't get up on my scheduled time.

I always oversleep when not at work.


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And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training.


And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training.

And, I studied English, ran, and did some strengths training outside, and I've been doing some workout.

"ran" alone is a bit too brief I think. "ran outside" would be more precise.

I've only just started any of them , but I'm gonna continue.


I've only just started any of them , but I'm gonna continue.

I've only just started any of them , these activities, but I'm gonna continue.

as far as studying English, I feel depressed because I don't feel that my skills are improving.


aAs far as studying English, I feel depressed because I don't feel that my skills are improving.

aAs far as studying English is concerned, I feel depressed because I don't feel thatlike my skills are improving.

However, I believe that continuation is power and I will continue to work hard everyday.


However, I believe that continuationpersistence is power and I will continue to work hard everyday.

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