dannymleone's avatar
dannymleone

Aug. 5, 2020

0
The beauty of nature

I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc. from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into (a) meaningful sentence(s) or a short story.

Random words; CHASM, MIND HAS GONE BLANK

I tried to describe my feelings and emotions in a poetic form while I was standing at the verge of a gigantic and steep chasm, but my mind had gone absolutely blank in the face of that frightening beauty.

Corrections

I tried to describe my feelings and emotions in a poetic formally while I was standing aton the verge of a gigantic and steep chasm, but my mind had gone absolutely blank in the face of that frightening beauty.

poetically: sounds more natural
on the verge: this expression always uses the preposition "on"

dannymleone's avatar
dannymleone

Aug. 6, 2020

0

Thank you, again.

The beauty of nature


I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs etc.


from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into (a) meaningful sentence(s) or a short story.


Random words; CHASM, MIND HAS GONE BLANK


I tried to describe my feelings and emotions in a poetic form while I was standing at the verge of a gigantic and steep chasm, but my mind had gone absolutely blank in the face of that frightening beauty.


I tried to describe my feelings and emotions in a poetic formally while I was standing aton the verge of a gigantic and steep chasm, but my mind had gone absolutely blank in the face of that frightening beauty.

poetically: sounds more natural on the verge: this expression always uses the preposition "on"

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium