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The Basketball Training Class

I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house. She is training on the basketball court and I am sitting beside it. There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.
She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want. I see the class as a exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

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I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

I brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

She is training on the basketball court and I am sitting beside it.

She was training on the basketball court and I was sitting beside it.

There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.

There were only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.

She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want.

She looked very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want.

I see the class as a exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

I see the class as an exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

The Basketball Training Class

It’s correct, but “The” feels a bit weird to me here.

I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

She is training on the basketball court, and I am sitting beside it.

There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.

She looks very happy playing basketball with the other kids, and I think this is exactly what I want.

I see the class as an exercisinge and entertainment class, but not a skill training class, lol.

pattern: A, but not B.

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I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams., so there are only five kids in the class today,

She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids,. I think this is exactly what I want.

I see the class as an exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

The Basketball Training Class


The Basketball Training Class

It’s correct, but “The” feels a bit weird to me here.

I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.


I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

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I've brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

I brought my daughter to her basketball class at a college near our house.

She is training on the basketball court and I am sitting beside it.


She is training on the basketball court, and I am sitting beside it.

She is training on the basketball court and I am sitting beside it.

She was training on the basketball court and I was sitting beside it.

There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.


There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams., so there are only five kids in the class today,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.

There were only five kids in the class today, because the winter holiday just began and most kids are relaxing after final exams.

She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want.


She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids,. I think this is exactly what I want.

She looks very happy playing basketball with the other kids, and I think this is exactly what I want.

She looks very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want.

She looked very happy playing basketball with other kids, I think this is exactly what I want.

I see the class as a exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.


I see the class as an exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

I see the class as an exercisinge and entertainment class, but not a skill training class, lol.

pattern: A, but not B.

I see the class as a exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

I see the class as an exercising and entertainment class but not a skill training class, lol.

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