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I'm a congolese and in my country the first october is the back to school day. So the last Wednesday was the back to school day and also my first day on high school. Then, let me tell you more about my opinions. Firstly, i've been scared, cause the first day on high school means new teachers, new subjects and some new friends. But i've been also up to meet up my old friends . Secondly, we've 8 Subdjects more than the last school year, I must learn and read more. To finish, that was amazing and i thind this new year sounds good.
I'm a cCongolese and in my country the first of October is the back to school day.
So the, last Wednesday was the back to school day and alsoday, my first day onf high school.
TWell then, let me tell you more about my opinions.
Firstly, iI've been scared, cause the first day on f high school means new teachers, new subjects and some new friends.
But iStill, I've been also upble to meet up with my old friends .
Secondly, we've 8 S have eight subdjects more than the last school year, so I must learn and read more.
To finish, I'll say that was amazing, and ithat I do thindk this new year sounds good.
The bFirst Day of School (or First Day Back to sSchool day)
I'm a congolese and in my country the first of October is the first day back to school day.
So the last Wednesday was the back to school dayfirst day back and also my first day oin high school.
Then, lLet me tell you more about my opinions.how I'm feeling about the year
(or let me tell you more about my thoughts about the year). opinions are slightly different (like, i hate that they changed the number of subjects, not just that they changed them)
Firstly, i've been scared, cause the first day onf high school means new teachers, new subjects and some new friends.
But i've been also upalso been excited? to meet up with my old friends .
not exactly sure what you were trying to say here, i think excited might be it?
Secondly, we' have 8 Ssubdjects more than the last school year, so I must learn and read more.
To finish, that was amazing and i thindk this new year soundswill be good.
not sure what is amazing
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Good job! Was able to understand your main ideas and you also used a lot of words and phrases that sound very natural. Hope you have a great school year!
The back to school day
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I'm a congolese and in my country the first october is the back to school day. I'm a congolese and in my country the first of October is the first day back to school I'm |
So the last Wednesday was the back to school day and also my first day on high school. So So |
Then, let me tell you more about my opinions.
(or let me tell you more about my thoughts about the year). opinions are slightly different (like, i hate that they changed the number of subjects, not just that they changed them)
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Firstly, i've been scared, cause the first day on high school means new teachers, new subjects and some new friends. Firstly, i've been scared, cause the first day o Firstly, |
But i've been also up to meet up my old friends . But i've not exactly sure what you were trying to say here, i think excited might be it?
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Secondly, we've 8 Subdjects more than the last school year, I must learn and read more. Secondly, we Secondly, we |
To finish, that was amazing and i thind this new year sounds good. To finish, that was amazing and i thin not sure what is amazing To finish, I'll say that was amazing, and |
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