Dec. 2, 2025
The Autumn Colours in Shanghai
I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.
It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.
Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos. You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8
I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speaking. After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.
Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy. Haha~
The Autumn Colours in Shanghai
I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.
It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.
Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos.
You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8
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After editing the video, I found thsome music sounds perfect withfor it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.
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A beautiful video! And the music is perfect!
Dec. 5, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
The Autumn Colours in Shanghai
In the U.S., we spell it “color.” :-)
I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.
It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.
Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos.
“Changing the color of their leaves” sounds a bit odd, as if the trees had control over this phenomenon. Some alternatives:
• The leaves were changing colors on many beautiful trees…
• The leaves on many beautiful trees were changing colors…
• The colors of the leaves were changing on many beautiful trees…
• The foliage on many trees was turning to beautiful reds, yellows and golds…
You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8
I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speaking English.
More natural.
After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.
Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy.
Alternative: …an excuse to be lazy.
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Beautiful trees, leaves and light!
Most of the trees around here are bare now, but we had beautiful leaves a month ago. Here’s a photo:
http://youtube.com/post/UgkxWp8g0jdmQSqitif0ZfZUR2TKtBhGsdhA?si=9Iv5WFpsFE_HADts
Dec. 3, 2025
Wow, these trees look stunning with the images on the water surface.
What a wonderful world!
Autumn falls in both Oregon and Shanghai while the trees are diversified.
The Autumn Colours in Shanghai
I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.
It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.
Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos.
You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8
I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speakingspeaking in English.
"practice my English speaking" is correct, but sounds less natural than "speaking in English" - at least to me.
After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.
Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy.
Haha~
Dec. 3, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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