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The Autumn Colours in Shanghai

I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.

It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.

Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos. You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8

I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speaking. After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.

Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy. Haha~

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The Autumn Colours in Shanghai

I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.

It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.

Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos.

You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8

I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speakingspeaking in English.

"practice my English speaking" is correct, but sounds less natural than "speaking in English" - at least to me.

After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.

Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy.

Haha~

The Autumn Colours in Shanghai


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I jogged along the river near my apartment to Century Park on Sunday.


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It was around 2 PM, and the sunshine was great.


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Many beautiful trees were changing the colour of their leaves, so I raised my phone, taking some pictures and videos.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can look at the colours here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VCcs_HaeEw8


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speaking.


I had planned to dub this video in English, because I wanted to practice my English speakingspeaking in English.

"practice my English speaking" is correct, but sounds less natural than "speaking in English" - at least to me.

After editing the video, I found the music sounds perfect with it, so I gave up the idea of dubbing it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or, it was just an excuse for being lazy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Haha~


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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