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The Art of Pizza
We should talk.
Right now. Right here.
I cannot hold it anymore
Yes, I'll be open with you.
No more running around
I have a secret but it is still me! It is still me , I am telling you!
I really love pizza with pineapples
and I add mayo and ketchup on top
So you know it now. That's what I wanted to say.
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The Art of Pizza
We should talk.
Right now.
Right here.
I cannot hold it in anymore.
Like the other correcter said, "can't hold it" is a phrase for when you have to pee badly, but "can't hold it in" can be used for emotional outbursts, secrets, etc
Yes, I'll be open with you.
No more running around.
I have a secret, but it isI'm still me!
It is'm still me , I a'm telling you!
"I am" feels too formal for what's otherwise really casual writing
I really love pizza with pineapples
and I add mayo and ketchup on top
So now you know it now.
That's whatall I wanted to say.
Sounds more natural, emphasizing that it was the only thing you wanted to say and you're done now
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Can you even repent for such a horrible sin?
I cannot holstand it anymore.
The expression you used has the wrong association--it is used when you have to urinate.
"stand it" is one option; there are others
I have a secret, but {it is still me!}
"it is still me" doesn't seem to fit here. I don't understand how having a secret would make you not yourself (especially such a trivial secret) but maybe other readers will understand. I'm not even sure what to suggest as an improvement. Maybe "I have a secret, but it doesn't change who I am."
{It is still me ,} I am telling you!
{ } It sounds odd to me in this context
So now you know it now.
That is the set phrase.
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I cannot hold it anymore I cannot The expression you used has the wrong association--it is used when you have to urinate. "stand it" is one option; there are others I cannot hold it in anymore. Like the other correcter said, "can't hold it" is a phrase for when you have to pee badly, but "can't hold it in" can be used for emotional outbursts, secrets, etc |
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I have a secret but it is still me! I have a secret, but {it is still me!} "it is still me" doesn't seem to fit here. I don't understand how having a secret would make you not yourself (especially such a trivial secret) but maybe other readers will understand. I'm not even sure what to suggest as an improvement. Maybe "I have a secret, but it doesn't change who I am." I have a secret, but |
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It is still me , I am telling you! {It is still me { } It sounds odd to me in this context I "I am" feels too formal for what's otherwise really casual writing |
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and I add mayo and ketchup on top This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So you know it now. So now you know That is the set phrase. So now you know |
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That's what I wanted to say. That's Sounds more natural, emphasizing that it was the only thing you wanted to say and you're done now |
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